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  Guest chapter 27 . 4/12 Ok...I don't even get to finish reading the chapter. I have to rant now even if it turns out I'm wrong. Going into the forest at 6PM is ridiculous. A. Dumbledore is blatantly setting them up for a cozy night alone? Why bother, already done that for every night by assigning head girl/ boy quarters. B. cause it's such a good idea to do dangerous stuff at night. See injured unicorn quest and third task of triwiz. C. It makes so much sense to miss a full day of classes AFTER their dangerous night instead of just going in the daytime when those classes are being missed. Ok end of rant I'll go back to your otherwise pretty good story. |
| Guest chapter 60 . 3/27/2019 I know this is old, but I cant believe I wasted so much time on this. Grammatical mistakes galore and horrible characterization. It didn't even feel like I was reading HP fanfic at times because the characters were so unbelievable. It feels like this was written by a 15 year old who has learned everything they know about "love" from corny movies. Even when I did find myself following along and finally getting interested there would be some random author's note in the middle of the chapter. A good writer should never have to explain their reasoning IN THE MIDDLE OF A SENTENCE. Also "your" is possessive and "you're" means you are. |
 BlackRoseargh chapter 57 . 10/31/2018 KEEP WRITING. YOU ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER. |
| BlackRoseargh chapter 53 . 10/31/2018 i'm not sure why you put ''servo'' in there, because servo means servant, slave. interesting though! a great writer you are![yoda] |
| BlackRoseargh chapter 37 . 10/31/2018 LOVE MOOKIE! HILARIOUS! GO MOOKIE! GO MOOKIE!GO MOOKIE! GO MOOKIE!GO MOOKIE! GO MOOKIE!GO MOOKIE! GO MOOKIE!GO MOOKIE! GO MOOKIE!GO MOOKIE! GO MOOKIE!GO MOOKIE! GO MOOKIE!GO MOOKIE! GO MOOKIE!GO MOOKIE! GO MOOKIE!GO MOOKIE! GO MOOKIE!GO MOOKIE! GO MOOKIE!GO MOOKIE! GO MOOKIE! |
| BlackRoseargh chapter 11 . 10/30/2018 you are a very good writer. don't beat yourself up, but don't act like you are perfect either! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/7/2018 Sorry. But this is terrible. Bad rushed writing, characters are so ooc it's literally unbelievable even to imagine, honestly if you're looking for good dramionie save yourself some time and brain cells and skip this |
| Guest chapter 46 . 8/24/2018 this is the first time i’ve ever cried whilst reading a piece of literature. kudos to you, you’re an amazing writer, and i can’t seem to stop reading this, even after the more than a decade it’s been published for. |
| nicoledixon485 chapter 24 . 7/9/2018 omgggggggggg! I hope Draco is ok! Loves you Dracosgirl 3 |
| Gabby chapter 52 . 6/23/2018 I know in the time u wrote this story this song wasn't out but... ONE DIRECTION That's WHAT MAKES YOU BEAUTIFULLLLLL |
| Gabby chapter 51 . 6/23/2018 OMGGGGG fangirling soooo HaRdddddddddddd |
| Gabby chapter 38 . 6/23/2018 I love Bradin already he is like, little sister that is exactly what I am going to do. And I was like pffttt |
| Gabby chapter 32 . 6/23/2018 His SEXY BODYYY LOL |
| Gabby chapter 15 . 6/19/2018 LOL |
| Guest chapter 38 . 6/6/2018 Krista said she thinks Draco is sexy in front of her parents haha! I laughed at that! I like your story :) |
