Of course...everyone else gets pissed, Tristan cuts his bonds...of course he does. Is it bad him jumping up and killing the one Saxon cracked me up? Because it did.

Oh, new idea! Can the hawk peck/claw Cedric's eyes out? I mean, clearly she's got a plan or knows that someone has a plan. And now Tristan might be in on the plan...and I have no bloody idea what's going on.

O-kay. Yep. The saxons gotta die. Cedric painfully. Where are the woads when you need them?

I still cannot get over you writing style. I mean, normally, this kind of thing would drive me nuts and I'd be complaining about everyone being ooc; but you make it work. It makes me sort of want to hate you, but I can't.

So, when's the rescue? (and just so you know, I will probably asking this question every single review until it happens).

Well. That was...disturbingly poetical. I like it. I mean, I don't like what's happening. Cedric's certainly inciting a desire to be stabity. But I like how you wrote Arthur and Lancelot having a complete conversation with just a couple looks.

Now, can we get to the whole stabbing Cedric thing or are we going to have to sit uncomfortably through more torment for our knights? Uncomfortable torment? Oh goody.

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What do you mean?

Berbat

Well that's depressing...I'm not sure which is worse, knowing that there would be hell on earth in the upcoming chapters and more prolonged drama and suffering...or the fact that the story ends here and we may never have closure. *Walks away grumbling to brood*

wow I just found this story and it's amazing. I love Tristan so I'm glad he got a bigger part. My favorite part was where Arthur pulled Tristan back and gave him a hug. It gave me a warm feeling inside. I have friends who are like Tristan almost (but no where cool enough), they hate to show emotion and stuff and I can't ever imagine hugging them like Arthur did. It just was like the most beautiful thing I have read in a long time. It was done perfectly. Are you going to continue to update this? I hope you do, because this is a amazing piece of work.

Very, very, very late review, but I read the entire story in one sitting and I really wanna know what happens to Arthur and Lancelot.

You are the champion of your genre. I've never seen anyone who... I've just... I love the way you write.

Lovely. Really wonderful.

I always meant to review this entire piece, but never did, so here is my review, in five words:

Best. King. Arthur. Story. Ever.

That is all.

- Abs x

Aw.. Poor knights! Good story though it is sad.

ELYSE ROZEMA

Wow, another amazing chapter. I especially liked what you did in Tristan's parts... Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please! C.

oh sweet. . . oh sweet oh my good lord oh sweet holy I don't even know! I'm so excited that I was able to come back from my vacation and see this wonderful treasure waiting here for me! I can't believe this! I knew it I knew it!

I love you! Did I ever let you know that? D

By the way, I am QUITE pleased that you had Gawain tell the Saxons that Galahad lives. I have a feeling that there is a lot of foreshadowing in that one little line. And I am absolutely in love with the whole Arthur/Lancelot you have going on here. I can't believe Lancelot jumped, but you have my heart in my throat right now, I hope you know that. You always know how to keep me on edge, and right now is EXACTLY one of those moments! You must continue much sooner doll! I know that you have moved and everything, but think of this fic and King Arthur as something that is going to remain constant for you! (its what is helping me cope)

I really really enjoyed this chapter, and I mean that with the utmost sincerity. And now I think I shall go and read it again. I love the image of Galahad smiling with that flower tucked in his tunic. Absolutely wonderful.

ta love

Shauna

I LOVE YOUR STORY! I LOVE IT! EVERY SINGLE WORD IS JUST BEAUTIFUL. And Lancelot and Arthur ... my sweethearts.