Dam it sucide squad! Amanda you cunt I hope Spider-Man exposes you like a giant web. Scum bag govt

I love this story. Whoever wrote this was a genius. I loved that the writer had Spider-Man and Supergirl get together, I was not expecting that. Some parts of the story made me laugh. I also like that Doctor Octopus was added, in my opinion he will always be Spidey's
Arch Nemesis. Great job and I hope the writer makes a sequel to the story

You know what, nvm about my last comment. I sat just looking at the first sentence for a minute and couldn't make myself read this. You got the introduction all wrong and I don't see how it could develop in a good direction from here.

If you ever decide to rewrite this then lose the moment where Peter lands in their base while they're talking about needing a new member. Too convenient and not as funny as I think you were going for. Even if it turns out somebody sent him there so it's reasonable why he appeared as he did... I don't care. Get rid of that scene. Then hold back on revealing spider man's past. Leave it something of a mystery for others, and with it kept close to his heart explore how his past is affecting him and the painful process of moving past it. That makes everything more compelling. A look at the reviews tells me you should've leveraged his intelligence in the story a lot more too, so there's that. My last advice would be to keep peter a bit distant from the team for the first couple arcs. Trauma is a long process to heal from and just shoving a bunch of nice people around him and telling them to be friends isn't going to fix it. So let him have his own time while they're around if he needs them. That's better than what I presume you did which is keeping him in the station for a long time or basically chaining him to be at at least one persons side at all times.

I very nearly dropped this the moment he started narrating his past like it made sense to tell them. It didn't. I didn't believe it and it reeked of a forced info dump. 3-10 for the first chapter. It did enough to keep me reading, but almost made me quit it at the same time.

So the heroes plan to escape was to have Sue humiliate Doom by making his clothes invisible? I know there weren’t any options if that wasn’t it but I gotta be honest, that’s just lame.

So again the curse will continue and Pete will be a photograph
And here I though he will use his brain for the better of the society

the setup for this story feels forced. like peters past was just erased and he moved on without complaint. there just doesn't feel like a devestating emotional impact happened, instead it feel like you just wanted to skip to him integrating into the new world. because you rushed all of that, the story feels inauthentic and therefore doesn't hook my interest.

Peter is not into Harems but it is a hard choice but Kara is the best for him.

The story is worth its many reviewers but I want to see who Peter pairs up with.

I think you meant Athena there is no Goddess named Athlea.

What kinda machine randomly transfer ppl around with this luck.. You need some magic in this cross over anndd i hope i dont see more marvel chars here it is a real bummer for dc spider

For the love of god have him upgrade his suit he currently has the resources needed if he asked available to him and he’s a genius. Let him show it for Christ’s sake.

Give peter some credit he’s literally a genius by far one of the smartest people in marvel universe which has several people that are vastly more intellectual then Batman.

Bro let’s not make it sound like anyone in the justice league would be actually horrified by a mutilated body, sure bothered or surprised but not horrified.

Got to love temperamental hissy fits,