Great story up till the last. So sad that you have lost you way with the end. Thanks for sharing!

Why the hell wouldn't Harry have killed Bellatrix? It would only have taken a second witha cutting curse, and he's leaving an enemy behind him. Sure, he snapped her wand, but how hard is it for her to get another one? Not hard at all ...

Okay, Snape and Dumbledore on the train? Already completely unbelievable. Never happened in canon, and no explanation for why it's happening now. Both have much more important things to do with their time than ride on the train for hours. Next, Dumbledore letting students threaten a professor? Wouldn't happen in any Dumbledore is totally OOC. Doesn't matter what happened to Harry. Dumbles simply would not let anyone threaten his spy Snape.

evil.

Madam Bones is dead as of the last chapter

um Amelia died earlier.

what happens next？

The ending was a bit rushed. It was disappointing to find there is no sequel to this.

Amelia Bones was killed in the attack on the ministry. How is she now at Potter's trial?

Really? Harry is rescued just after Snape, the Order spy, gets to torture him? Not suspicious at all that!

What sexual immorality? Harry is a teenage boy with hormones and a half dressed willing girl in his arms. Who participated wholeheartedly. Considering all the young people in Hogwarts, the lax security and near total lack of supervision, it's surprising there weren't at least 2-3 pregnancies a year. Including the 'I can get away with whatever I want mentality cause nobody does anything, there must have been more than a few rapes occurring. Knowing nothing would happen to the perpetrators they likely went unreported. All things considered, Hogwarts was a lousy school.

Per Ginny's "loving speech" when first seeing Harry again: If this is the way the students & staff of Hogwarts love Harry, he's better off with them hating him. His treatment by staff & students has been abominable since first year. Dumbledore's first actions when Harry regained consciousness were very OOC. Normally his first words would be " I must know everything that happened. Now, Harry" not giving a damn how badly hurt he was. Why wasn't Ginny's first reaction to Harry starting to wake to call Pomphrey? To run to the headmaster is stupid, and shows where her loyalties are. As is discernable, Ginny is not my favorite character That last sentence about the glimpse of malice was so completely Dumbles. To consider that anything Harry MIGHT do would be worse than anything Voldemort has ALREADY done is totally absurd. Complete lack of common sense.

So the moral of this story is that Harry is tortured so he turns into a ho'bag and kills people. Yay?

In a previous chapter it was stated that amelia was dead.

I couldn’t help but read this version. I was torn. I Am so completely entertained. I can’t say I liked who he became but I also can’t say that there were parts that had me laughing. Harry was a fucking bad ass. Again. I am torn. I wish the ending was a bit more but I understand and got the gist of it. I are truly a talented writer.