Reviews for Asphyxia
5-STAR chapter 13 . 6/24/2012
Great story!
Blueyedgirl chapter 13 . 2/20/2012
Absolutely love this story. It has inspired me to write a few angsty drabbles 3, you are an amazing writer and I feel gloriously melancholy after reading this.

Please write more! I know you haven't updated in ages, but I wish you would just get back on here and write another 50 chapters. I can never get enough!
i've basically deleted sorry chapter 13 . 4/6/2011
This story is so amazing! It's sad that you haven't updated since 2004, though. I hope you just get on here randomly and decide to update. This is one of my favorite stories on this site.

I hope to read more of it eventually :)
TheLadyPendragon chapter 13 . 1/2/2011
This fanfic is very good. It's beautifully written and I enjoy the character interaction very deeply. It's been so many years since you've updated, but I'm holding out the hope that you will, eventually. Please write more, if you can?
Ketterly chapter 13 . 12/16/2010
I'm a little late to the game, but wow, is this amazing!

Please update it. How sweet and sad and wonderful it is. I want more, more, more.
jnd25 chapter 13 . 10/13/2010
I love this story I would love if u would continue it
jill chapter 13 . 9/13/2010
Wow what a great story I loved it I would love to see more from you, you are a great writer my favorite thus far I love father son fics with angel and connor
shawna chapter 10 . 9/13/2010
Love this fic I just love connor and angel being pure father and son
boycrazy30008 chapter 10 . 12/2/2009
OMG Its a Walgreens Commercial
esperanza100 chapter 13 . 7/25/2009
i absolutely love this Story! i wish you would update!
connor-rox chapter 13 . 5/20/2009
Poor Connor! I like the tearapy thing! Its so funny! And angel so hates ireland!
ficwriterjet chapter 3 . 2/17/2009
I liked Connor thinking about needing to appease the person in charge. I also liked him remembering resenting God, and wanting to be ‘father’s good boy’. I can see him thinking both of those things. And I can certainly see Holtz calling him wicked boy when he wasn’t pleased.

How very sad and true to character for both of them that Angel is glad Connor is alive, while Connor himself isn’t. Connor thinking of himself as a disease is perfect. Poor kid.

I loved Connor going in and putting on Angel’s shirt, and drinking his whisky. Alcohol is a widely used coping mechanism – one I’ve used myself on many occasions. I understand Connor wanting to forget. Wanting it all to go away if only for a little while. Loved Angel’s shock when he realizes that Connor is drunk.

I thought bringing up the smell of Angel’s shirt, and the smell of Connor’s baby blanket was well done. Connor having enhanced smelling, and having fine tuned that while trying to become a good tracker, smell is going to be important to him. Smell is a strong memory producer for everyday people, so I would imagine it would be even more so to Connor.

I loved this line: "You can't love me because I hate you." And I loved Connor telling Angel that he was just ‘sick’ with him. Angel rocking Connor until he passed out was wonderful. Very good part to the story.
ficwriterjet chapter 2 . 2/17/2009
I love the 'Whatever'. I use the 'whatever'. Apathy is a dangerous thing.

I loved Connor's thoughts about Angel being rehashed ideas that Holtz had put into his head, mixed with facts, and with his own feelings towards Angel. Loved that you point out often how Angel's skin is cold. That would be difficult to deal with. A constant reminder that your father isn't human.

Angel telling Connor that he lovd him - well that's exactly what I think Angel would say at this point. And I loved that Connor admitted that he didn't know that Angel loved him.

I thought the tuck in was kind of sweet. I liked Angel telling him he'd feel better in the morning, and Connor thinking that he'd just feel the "tingling after the numbness". Wonderful.
ficwriterjet chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Now see if I'd found this back in the day, it might have been enough of a resolution for me, that I wouldn't have had to write my own Connor story. :)

I would have LOVED to see Connor go home with Angel, even if it was to Wolfram and Hart. And having no one know what he'd done is perfect. See that would have been a MUCH better deal for Angel to make. Stupid show! Loved that Connor knew the 'adults' weren't that much older then him biologically, but he thought of them that way because of how they treated him.

Connor feeling like he couldn't breath was beautiful. No dirt, no soggy footprints, nobody telling him what he did was wrong, and all the while he KNOWS what he's done. Knows his own potential for future kills because of past kills. I wouldn't be able to breath either.

Lovely part. I'm all giddy to read the next one. :)
smarterthanyouraveragetoddler chapter 13 . 1/3/2009
I love this story it is exactly how it should have been with the relationship between Angel and Conner though a bit random at times I do have to say that I wish the writers used you're idea for the father son relationship because although it is rocky and confusing for atleast Connor it was way better than the one they had in the sho thnx and update please it's a great story and I would love to read more! x)
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