hope to see more of this someday~

I hope someday you can continue and complete this masterpiece.

Do not stop, please continue. It's great and all writers always give up their best stories.

It's a bit choppy. I know we all know the game (well, not all of us...), but it just seems a bit disjointed at times; like we're reading a book with every other page torn out.

I hope you continue this story it's really good, I like when fanfictions are close the the video game or TV show they are based off on.

Ugh...okay, I thought this was going to be a nice, easy read, but I can tell already it's not going to be. Commas... you really need them. There's a lot of run on sentences here that make some of the writing confusing. And I don't really get why people in every fandom do this but... there's no need to retell the game events. Usually if someone is reading in a certain fandom that probably means they've played the game, read the story, or watched the movie/show. So we know what happened in the game, we don't need an author basically pasting the game script. I'm not saying you did,but close to it. A lot of authors tend to do this,so we're constantly reading the same events over and over with little variations they add in to make it "original". Meh...

One thing that's really bothering me is your use of description when it comes to the adversaries they've faced so far. They're all "fat disgusting men" who do" fat dances" it seems though if someone is bad or unlikable in your story, they're fat. That's the only way you are conveying them as "bad". I suggest you learn new descriptions . One, it's really cliche to do what you're doing. And two is super immature, and amateur. Bad people come in all shapes and sizes. They're not always "fat, oily, and disgusting." As cheap cliches tend to describe them.

I must say, at first I wasnt to sure about this fic, but now i love it! I think you have done a great job portraying all thr characters and love how you acutally use the weapons and such from the game! Cant wait to see more from you!

Please update and continue with this story I loved. Thank you

Well this was about the biggest surprise ever. I'm pretty sure this story was one of the first I ever read when I originally found this site.

Seems to have kept consistent after a re-read of the rest. Looking forward to the next part, no matter how long it may take.

Story is great, i love it. Please update :)

I'm glad you updated. It's a good story. I liked the chapter.

I'm so happy. I love this fanfic.
Thank you for continuing

will continue? Please?

What about chapter 21?

Oh no you have to update. You can't stop here