This stories premise is outrageous as after Hikaru became an Insei he quit going to school. Sai left much after that.

Update please

Cool story! The plot is interesting but there is a lot of work that needs to be done to fix the grammar. Hope you update!

This came out well continue the good work lol :D

Its ID not i/c

I think thats what you ment .' sweatdrop

You had a typo for the word salon twice you wrote it as saloon (...fail lol)

You often use past tense intead of preasant tense at times

Other then grammer the plot is good as is the characters personalitys are right on the mark you have good discriptions in your writings as well

I am likeing thisstory very much

I am a sai fangirl after all :D

This is so weird! Did your fic is OOC (which means "out of character") ? O.o

First: Hikaru never treat Sai so bad after he recognized Sai's role.

Second: Sai would never revenged Hikaru for whatever the reason is or whatever Hikaru did to him.

Sai is very beautiful indeed! :D

This is bad! Hikaru is so cruel to treat Sai like that(didn't he is the one who always wanted Sai to come back?)!

Not a touched reunion I've imaged but ... "little cute ghost"? - Oh right! This point would never be wrong (specially "a ghost a fraid of a ghost" made this point became absolutely right). OMG! Hahahaha! XDDD

Since when Sai became "chubby"? O.o

hey can you please finish this story please ...

Well, it's pretty funny but nice. I also same Malaysian like you. Actually, I also want to write HnG fanfic but I need some times to research the manga and anime. Blame me for not researching the new anime and manga for a long time because played too much Perfect World (hehe...).

You need to either stop writing, or write this in your own native language. You don't speak english fluently.

I hope that I'm right in assuming that you're foreign; I'm still clinging to the hope that nobody could be -this- stupid, while still retaining knowledge of how to work a computer.

hi~

hee, actually i havent read the story~but i save liao la~plan to read when i'm offline~

now what can i say is~

NO COMMENT

coz havent read ma~

(i'm writing nonsense~just for gao gao zhan)

*smiles* Konnichiwa Sakura-chan~

im glad you finally decided to update~ yay!

and it was a good chapter too. i wouldnt have guessed in a million years that Hikaru's evil plan was for Sai to get a job. when Hikaru said he was gonna get him a job i was wondering why Sai didnt want to be a pro Go player like Hikaru. i dont think its nessasary for Sai to be an insei. anyway, i was kinda Laughing when Hikaru said he got him a job at a bakery. i thought... lol. Sai in a cute maid outfit. bad me. *laughs* i was thinking of when Chii from Chobits worked in a bakery. Cute~ i thought Sai might attract lots of nice costumers.

but then Sai said Hikaru's mom got him a job, and then all that avoiding each other thing happened. and i was like aw. how sad.

lol. but i think my fav part was in the Go institute. all those girls smacking into everyone just to see Sai. lol. and Poor Sai crowded by girls. i was kinda sceptical that Sai was working in a souvernir shop. you would have thought he would have been doing something more Go related. who knows, maybe he can be a tutor in the Go institute, he has experience with that.

but i of course i really liked the part near the end with Sai's cute puppy eyes that were watering at the time. Ultimate cuteness~ *laughs* i wonder if Hikaru is gonna try and save Sai, from the crazy fangirls~..er.. i mean girls. *laughs*

well, Ja ne~

Sakura-chan~

~ Kari ~