Reviews for Still Alive! ? !
ISupportFanFicWriters chapter 41 . 4/6
Wow. A powerful story.
I cried.
Thank you so much for your amazing work!
ISupportFanFicWriters chapter 18 . 4/6
Such a moving chapter, thank you!
ISupportFanFicWriters chapter 11 . 4/6
Aaaah a cliffhanger.
You are so mean :)
ISupportFanFicWriters chapter 10 . 4/6
Ooooh the mystery is now so very interesting!
I am enjoying your story!
WeisseHex chapter 29 . 2/1
Oh for fucks sake!
VampireAngel4Life chapter 41 . 11/11/2019
Please make a sequel. I honestly feel like I read this story and it was much longer or a sequel or something. Will you come back and continue?
Fyrebird85 chapter 41 . 10/12/2019
Well, I made it all the way to the end, which is rather unresolved - a literary device I don't care for. Hermione is nosy, bossy, and interfering; Dumbledore is thinks violating privacy is a way to regain somebody's trust (and yes, I figured out that Dumbledore faked the "vision" that put Harry in the hospital wing to try to force a confidence); Poppy figures out the truth but that was a plot dead-end that was never followed up on; Lupin is, as always, disappointment as a mentor. Two plot holes. The first: how could Albus have cast that spell from his office? It needs to be cast on the person, and Harry wasn't there. (Besides the gross invasion of privacy to cast it at all, he has Mcgonagall there, too. The man hoards secrets, unless it's somebody else's secret.) Second plot hole: the Room of Requirement is sealed while in use, unless the person inside opens the door.
Fyrebird85 chapter 32 . 10/11/2019
I just have to ask: are we supposed to like Hermione? Because you're really turning her into a bitch.
Fyrebird85 chapter 31 . 10/11/2019
Remus is the last person in the world to tell him to wait, after STALKING Harry half the summer and then bringing up the letter himself, in complete defiance of his instructions. Honestly, I am gritting my teeth over how Harry is just going along with all the people snooping and interfering in his life, and the only one he resists at all is Dumbledore. Where is his outrage when Hermione thinks it's her place to interrogate him on his library books or to bloody write scripts for him to tell everybody? I'm still expecting her to tell Dumbledore (if the bastard doesn't illegally read it from her mind first), because she already said she thinks he should be informed. It's not like she has a history of respecting Harry's wishes, or his privacy. She almost just blurted the secret out, right there in the hallway.
Fyrebird85 chapter 15 . 10/11/2019
I'm really having trouble with Hermione's despicable NOSINESS, and the fact that Harry's just going along wih it.
Fyrebird85 chapter 11 . 10/11/2019
So, Harry picks Snape as his teacher because of his discretion, but as soon as HE sees one of SNAPE'S memories, he blabs it to somebody else. In a letter, no less, that he knows is not secure. So much for thinking before he acts.
Lorde Shadowz chapter 35 . 8/8/2019
Responding to Chapter 35:
THANK YOU! This is honestly the first time I've ever had anyone complain about the dunderheads who don't finish stories and promise to finish there's!
Lorde Shadowz chapter 7 . 8/8/2019
Aaaah! Your tense is all over the place! It's driving me crazy! Otherwise you have an interesting and compelling writing style, and I like it. Happy writing!
Fay-fay 45 chapter 41 . 4/25/2019
This story is great! My only complaint is that it ended on a cliffhanger and there's no sequel. I think that you are very talented and should continue to write, you have great ideas and brilliant execution. This is a story that I will continue to enjoy for many years to come. Please continue to write as you will only get better and better.
Guest chapter 41 . 11/29/2018
Absolute rubbish. What kind of parent who'd lost a child would ignore a potential reunion like Snape did. And a 15-year old Harry should not desperate enough to forgive that kind of attitude.
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