please update soon really love this story so far
cant wait for the next chapter

Crazy crazy. Past self, future self, former self! It all makes me quite curious.

i'm sad that this is the last chapter. do you really have to wait until roomates is edited before you update this one? i want more~!

i liked malachite's perspective. it's interesting to see how much he's changed from roommates, too. in the other story, she still annoys him, but in this one, he's so in love with her that he can't breathe. i liked it.

great cliffhanger. u had me biting my nails. i'm so glad that i still have two more chapters to read!

in the last chapter, i was wondering why this story was so much more serious than roomates, but this chapter showed me that your sense of humor is still there. i'm glad, though i like the story when it's serious , too.

when i saw that this was the sequel to roommates, i decided to read it even though i haven't read all of roomates yet. it was kind of wierd, because the mina in roommates isn't anything like the mina in this one. it'll be interesting to see how she changes.

this one is really good and i can't wait to read more1 ttyl

Hotaru-chan

Cool description of Mina. She's definately not the bubbly ditz we all knew and loved. She's cooler this way, though.

Wow. I've been waiting to see how Malachite would react when he saw Mina again, and this was worth the wait. I liked how you made it a dream-sequence, too. This means you get to play with Mal's head a little more, right? You're amazing.

Really well written. You're amazing.

Nice chappie again. I really love what you're doing with Mina. She seemed out of character at first, but I can see why she's doing this. Loved the bit about the Bat Cave, too. YOu're very funny.

r u ever going to update! its such a good story and i wish u would update, you can't leave everybody waiting!

Please ignore the silly blonde who left that last message. *Rolls eyes at her own stupidity, must learn to read*

Good luck with your mission, God be with you, and good heavens. A year and a half. You're so very brave.

I've been reading this story for ages. Years literally. As in... lemme check, just a second... since chapter 3. I know, I've never left a review before. I've tried, promise! My computers at home don't like fanfiction . net, I'm afraid, and I've never been able to leave a review- the connection always dies. At least your story isn't the only one the computer disapproved of ...

But anyway, since I HAVE been reading almost since you started this story, I wanted you to know how much you've improved. Not that you weren't good before. I've got so many copies of Roommates saved here and there. But reading through all this tonight? You've improved so much, from a decently-good author to an incredible one. Despite what seem to be your family's (and job's and life's) best attempts to slow you down.

I noticed you haven't updated in months, almost a year. Are you all right?