I like it! Just wish there was more to it, but still got my attention! :)

Wow. Just wow. I realyy like it. Fantastic job!

Oh, if only you two had finished this... such wonderful work.

Wow.

The imagery and metaphors that you both use is just amazing.

please continue...

This can't be the end. Please don't let it be. Or are you one of those people, who, when writing a good story, at the best parts suddenly stop? Are you doing this on purpose? I've been waiting a lot. You are not updating. I don't think the story is complete. Do you realise that you make us, readers suffer because of an unfinished story? You want this. You want to make us suffer. Or if you don't, then continue. Please. Let it be a happy end. Don't be such an asshole. Please? I am waiting, such as others. Don't make us upset.

wow you acutally copywritten your story, but it was okay.

Wow...that was really good. I hope there's more or that you've written other fics like this. The discription of the prince's decay into the hardened warrior he comes to be at the beginning of WW was very convincing. I really enjoyed this. Great job.

Is this the ending? OMG! If you don't continue this story... I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN, LOCK YOU IN A ROOM WITH A COMPUTER AND MAKE YOU CONTINUE! :-P j/k... I think. :D

Really, I love it. Is this the ending? Prince commiting suicide? Please don't let it be so! But alas, not everything is a happy ending.

One note: I thought Prince remembered everything... oh well.

Please write more! I am thrilled that what few writers who have written fics on the Prince of Persia have been excellent ones. Thank you very much for the good read.

Both of you capture the views of the Prince and Farah, you both are good writers! I cant wait to read more chapters. If i may ask, how do you get a copyright? I'd like to know, i'm thinking of copyrighting my work.

good so far. i LOVE ur beginning

Fabulous word choice. Sometimes overusage of the thesaurus (sometimes the mind needs to rest on simple refrences like empty space on a canvas). However, an overall achieved effect of personality and mood. Appreciate the accuracy of cultural words, like clothing and names.

The last four paragraphs of the seventh chapter are completely engrossing and rich, powerful in the subtle physical action described. It reflects the overwhelming introspective mood the Prince is in.

Please, please continue.

wow, absolutely superb. beautifully written, the eloquence and vividness of this story is amazing. your imagery is also wonderful, written with such brilliant clarity. i absolutely luv your characterizations, epecially the prince - you've captured his forlorness and anguish so intensly.

i cant wait to ssee how this story plays out. plz update soon _

I. Love. It. A few word choices (like visage for face) are the only thing I don't absolutely love about this piece! It's so well-written- I'm anti-cliche, and this is just so free and beautiful. Write more!

Hysteric: "the baths" is a tiny but awesome site! Your fan art is gorgeous. Who is the girl? Shadee? Also, I feel completely daft to be asking, but... I'm a member in the ubi PoP forums, how do I make an avatar and signature? Sorry to put all this in a review. Please email me back if you can, or post somewhere (your story, my story).

...must...continue...story...am...utterly...hooked. oh, and on the even chapters, the text is messed up. just thought i'd let ya know. INCREDIBLE STORY I SAY!