Your poem is very beautiful and inspiring. If I were to criticise, I'd say that the ending might be only slightly unclear (though, personally, I understood it instantly). I like the lack of rhyme and the repetitivity. Did you think of making a song out of it? I think that it could be turned into a beautiful, soft rock piece. Peace

C.

enh? he killed crowley? Wah! but the poem was really good anyway. very pretty. i just can't imagine Aziraphale killing anything, even if he was ordered to... oh well.

squee a lot! squee a lot!