IS THIS A PARODY OF TWILIGHT!? No no i'm only kidding but I just started reading your story, I faved it and followed it even though it seems to be done. I like it so far and I shall keep reading til the end, and like all stories including fanfiction there is bad parts and good parts you gotta read through the bad to get to the good. So far it's just good. Love it. Love your work. Favoriting you and the story. An now onto 2. Chapter 1. ;D

Awesome story!

That song exert that you used in this chapter is not papa roach, it's drowning pool. The song name is bodies. Please give credit to the right artists.

Before i leave your story : Love it! perfect AU ! Of course Harry and Draco being teenage boys their emotions are all over the place ( horny one moment, hungry the next, and angry and confused right after )... A few critiques if you wouldn't mind some creative advice? 1) Grammar and syntax was not that good, but not deplorable and easy to interpret. 2) There are a few places where the details are vague and it's a little difficult to understand what you mean, you could structure it a bit more... 3) A better distinction between the past and present in some chapters so that it's easy to follow... Sorry if i offended you in anyway ! I'm just trying to help *runs away and hides* Don't hate me!

LOVE IT!

fantastic story

This is boring, your grammar and spelling need work, your speech needs more depth, your words are very simple and undiscriptive, and you made Harry pathetic. Anyone with half a brain would be scared out of their mind, not relaxing into their creepy, perverted captor's arms as they bathe their nude body.

the story let me speachless. its gread and i dont have words to explain what i feel now after i read it. i wish there were a better word than exceptinal or smth else to describe the story but it isnt. im glad i read it even if at first i was a little descouraged by the size of it. thankyou for posting this incredible story and i hope u will write smth as good as this:D

XD

i love it

LOL! I love the Harry-apple conversation! Very well written!

i love this story, it amazing the way you made it suspensful and the way you showed the backstory of the charcters. your a great writer please dont stop. ive got a sugestion have you ever tried a harry x viktor story because i thinks that theres something there.

waw, this chapter is rather confusing... Is Draco a prince? Is he the one who attacked the kingdom? And when was that?

Well, I guess I'll find out later

wow I loved this story much

Hey, I just came across you fic and have been reading it for the past two days and just finished. I must say Job Well Done. I loved it. It has to be one of my favorite and probably the best vampire draco/harry fic I have read. I notice you have discontinued your sequel. I am sadden by that. i hope you will start it again one day. If not this is a great ending. hope to see more from you that is as good as thing one was.

I like this story though the change in the first and second person were a little confusing. all in all it was a good story. Great work!