Chapter 2 is great, especially the bit on BB. I love his reaction to the transformation.

This was a really good story. It kept true with the show and seemed just like a real episode. You are an amazing writer. Please keep on writing.

This story is very good. Very few spelling mistakes. Starfire's codename came from 'Koriand'r' which translates into Starfire (just like Komand'r Blackfire). But nice coming up with an explanation. Are you going with the cartoon and comics? Because if you were, you did a very good job. As for the Psions, they did indeed experiment on the girls, seeing how much energy they could absorb before they exploded. Star breaks free when Citadel guards come to rescue Blackfire. She saves Blackfire, who restrains her execution. Star gets out and crash-lands on Earth.

Starfire is Koriander (I have no idea where the apostrophe goes) translated into English. (:

Loved it, once again!

I've always loved origin fics. (: Especially Gar.

Two questions:

1. Where's Arella? (Raven's REAL mother, who also lives on Azarath)

2. (Parentheses) are these (). I think you meant "quotation marks".

Sorry about the knitpicking, it's a bad habbit of mine.

Well, this story looks pretty good from what I've seen so far. Nicely done.

But I do have a few comments:

1. I think that the name "Galfore" is spelled as shown (no "i").

2. In the comics, Blackfire's name is Komand'r, not "Kormand'r".

wow... that was pretty awesome and well planned!_!

i'm so happy to finally have some ideas of their origins and i hope u continues writing!_!

GREAT STORY... wanted to say that again

wow cool story i luv the ones where thay all get together

i might be a terra hater but still it was fantastic

I love your story. Even though I am a certified TERRAHATER I feel a bit of ashamed now that I know that verison of her past. I 'm pretty sure it might just be the fact that it is 11:00 at night. Being sleepy can cause you to be smphathetic.

you've captured each of the titans almost perfectly. Goofy, cocky, out-there Beastboy; quiet, intense Raven; innocent, sweet Starfire (I can totally see the RS thing going here); fun-loving, boo-yahing Cyborg; and the slightly aloof but in-charge Robin. I must read on!

wow, I'm really liking this. I love Starfire's language-it's very musical and fun to say. Can't wait to read the rest

I love it!

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