Too bad good story are rarely continued... It was cool!

please finish this!

Isn't it spelled Repliforce?

wow the return of magma(er cyber)dragoon. sounds great.

wow this seems to be a great story so far. hope that all your stories are like this

Glad you are still around!

That was quite cunning of you, letting everybody party, THEN having them remember about the final weapon. I must say I did not expect Dynamo to show up like that, on repliforce’s side nonetheless. The battle scene was good and creative, but I would have liked a couple of lines more between the two opponents. Some smart-alec comment from the Dynamo we all know and loathe for example.

It’s good to see seemingly dead stories continuing. Hopefully, it will take you less than a year for the next chapter :P

woot, a update...

Heh heh, never get Reploids drunk...

And the fight sence kind of confused me, I got to read it again...

Ah, it's been so long since I read this... My friend, you're just too good to your readers, you know that? Great work on this chapter. I can't wait for the conclusion your cooking up.

- Windwingxs

Even today in the 06 I still re-read this...

“The end? Don’t bet on it.” Does this mean a new chapters or a sequel? Either or this story is a classic. Those who remember this story (either in the back of their minds or plainly remember it) are still waiting...

Or in the worst case, somebody will continue this story for you.

I hope you give a word or something on is going to happen next...

more more more more more more more...an then some.

From tribes 2...

"I love IT!"

Well, the end or not? I guess I’m not sure. You implied that you may add a bit more. Either way, I think you’ll get my traditional one-pager now, since this seems to be overall the end, anyway.

Okay, first of all, it was a real joy to see an okay author turn into a great one. Obviously, there are still things to work out in your writing, but I have faith that you’ll keep practicing. You have improved so much since you started, it’s amazing. It’s great to see an author who actually listens to his reviewers and takes their advice, rather than simply blowing it off and continuing to write the same way, chapter after chapter, never improving. You have my respect.

On to the story; first of all, I’d like to thank you for NOT bringing Sigma back, and doing something slightly different instead. Colonel is a character that really gets overlooked, and rarely brought back in fan fiction, so as much as I hate dredging up the dead, he was a good choice in this case. Overall, your plotline meandered a little bit, and some things still seem a little irrelevant, such as Axl and Red Revolver. I can’t quite figure out how they added to the plot. Still, you had things nicely thought out in the end, and I’m assuming those couple of extra chapters that you mentioned will iron out some details, like the “black box” Harpuia wanted to know about and other such things.

Your character portrayal was, for the most part, quite good, although there were little things I didn’t agree with. I’m still trying to figure out why on earth Harpuia cared a crap about Glacia/Eartha, since he met her once, fought her once, and she had absolutely no redeeming qualities. (I don’t consider, “I want the planet to be beautiful,” a redeeming quality.) Frankly, I didn’t really care for that development at all, and I think Harpuia is more level-headed than to be bothered by killing some psycho-whore in an armored thong.

Leviathan was portrayed as a flirt, as usual, but be careful not to make her so shallow. If you want her to try to disgruntle Zero, that’s fine, but make sure you develop a little more personality than that. Too many people make Fefnir and Leviathan very one-dimensional, and I really think there’s a lot more to them than that, even if it’s hard to see in the games.

Zero was portrayed fairly well, for the most part, although the emotional runaround with him and Ciel is pretty typical in fan fiction. I really don’t think he’d get that worked up over things. If he cared about her, he’d say so, and if didn’t, then it’s not an issue. I don’t think he’d get all worried about whether or not she’s jealous.

Now, for this chapter… I love battles. Especially when they’re well-written like this one. Oh, there were a few problems, and once in awhile it got a little tiny bit hard to follow, but overall, this is by far the best battle you have written, and I enjoyed it immensely. As for the other stuff, like character interaction and whatnot, that scene with Harpuia, Leviathan, and the wheelchair was, however unlikely, completely priceless. (For everything else, there’s Master card!) I also thought it particularly funny when Sage quoted Gandalf upon his introduction into the battlefield. (I’m a Lord of the Rings buff… of course I’d appreciate that, and I’ve left a tell-tale reference or two in my fic, as well.)

So, for the thing as a whole… I was really only half- interested at first, and was reading it for the chance of a mention or two of Harpuia. (Yeah, I love him to death.) But now, I can safely say that I wasn’t just reading it for Sage; I genuinely liked it. If more authors did what you’ve done and tried to improve themselves so much, this site would be eighty times better. As it is, I’m glad I found a fic this good to read, even with it’s shortcomings. Never stop writing.

-Ri

It's not the end. Too much has been left unsaid between certain characters... Still, if you wanted to end it here, you could, but I wouldn't be happy about it. _

- Windwingxs

I should have seen that Two Towers bit coming I even muttered this is very familiar. You totally broke the moment with them making fun of Harpuia's lines.I like the scene where they are listening for the whispers. All in all very good chapter

Well, since you dropped a review and since I read your latest chapter, it’s high time I sat my a$$. down and reviewed your fic.

You started with perhaps my favorite battle in all MMZ games. I love killing Elf piss.. I mean Elpis(o) over and over again.

Then we get a serious case of deza vu, followed by a great battle.(Though the flame would not be so hot, what was he using? Evaporated lead?:-)

After that a prophesy, a guardian battle and Harpuia showing some character (IMO he was so in character. Never forget the guardians are not really evil.)

Following, we get some bittersweet flashbacks and a mad Alice-in-wonderland-matrix-western. Wow, you actually killed Axl. I wouldn’t dare to do that...

Also the appearance of agent Sm... I mean cyber phantom was hilarious.

Yay, the cyber-elves are alive. I’m so copying that idea. (Actually MK II)

Then we reach the sky! A Zero-guardians alliance, a change of pace in the resistance base and three well played battles. Though the jewel idea was a bit weird. Again yay, LeviZero and tones of sugar!

An electric giant rat! And the Eartha idea was great too, though it was the smaller battle of the three.

As for chapter 15... only one word. Epic.

Oh, and don’t pay attention to mister I-say-that-this-is-not-a-flame-but-it-is-actually-an-freaking-inferno.

Was that the last chapter? NO. CONTINUE. NOW!

IT CAN"T BE THE END! I like this fanfiction, keep going! PLZ!