Good story.

I really wanted to like this. But Sarah just seemed so angry and childish.

Haha- I've been reading so many one shots I thought this one was too at first. Anyways, I liked it. Could use some work, like more details and such, but I still liked it.

That was amusingly cute, but I hardly see how it's rated M. I mean, the words 'Whore' and kissing doesn't deem something mature.

I know you wrote this over two years ago, but if you wrote a sequel, I'd love to read it.

Loved the Oracle's info. Loved how it all turned out. (*narrow eyes*) So who was it that dared not be happy for our loving couple?

Great fic :)

That was awesome- the way that she was able to manipulate things, and the fact that she stayed even though he tried (breaking his own heart to do so) to send her back.

I'm ba-ack ;)

So, who's the wise one with the blue eyes? Liked Pelly- seems sweet. Liked that you made Jareth nice to the goblins and loved how Sarah took care of Lynn (though I'm hoping for a little more in that direction- none of the people who have treated her so badly have gotten their just desserts yet). I love the awe everyone there holds for Sarah- maybe it'll make the others stand up and take notice.

Her having powers is sweet. Their feelings for each other is delectable. The way he turned down Lynn was yummy. (hmm. I think I'm hungry. I'll be right back.)

I like how the only reason Brad is getting any help is because of Sarah- not that he's intelligent enough to realize that that is important. I like how the King and Sarah are dwelling on each other.

Oh. I don't know how she did it, but I love that she did. There was so much passion and wholehearted desire. And I can't wait to see how he takes his pain out on her horrible classmates.

The reunion was sweet. It was fun to read how weirded out the rest of her class is. Jareth's slur on Brad was fantastic. Love how much he loves her. And how he set down Lynn was yummy.

Oh, too cool. I've always LOVED Jareth and never understood why, or how, she could just take off on him like that. I like the way his devious mind works, especially since it's completely taken up with loving her. Great beginning :)

I really loved that story. Especially the part where Sarah made Lynn stop talking. Ttyl

ok i liked the story, but like u said the ending did suck sou need to either have to make a sequel or something.

hehe this was so cool