long shot, but don't suppose in light of a recent film coming out you'd be inspired to start up with the editing again, only I guess you never got past redoing the first chapter which is spectacular?

haha, couple of years too late but hopefully you'll consider :L 3

cts plz

please dont give up on this story! it rox! please update! !

fly like a bird chickadee

-MaxRideRox

hi nice chapter ] but i would like to have seen james be a little more protective of lily when she was slapped.

this story is amazing

please update

i want to know what happens between james and lily

and allie and sirius

all the relationships

wow. your story rock. how'd you get to be such a good author. update soon.

Thanx

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...cute...

I loved it..

*Sniffles* MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER!

this is a good story, apart from the many errors...but i'd just like to tell you that the cutting scene wasn't very realistic. a person who is cutting is very secretive about it, and it would have been a lot harder for the boys to find out about it, let alone Remus getting Lily to admit it. just thought i'd point that out so maybe in the future if you want to do a scene like this you can make it more realistic.

Umm...well, it's a good story, but you have a lot of run on sentences and comma splices (i don't know if you know what that means)...basically, there are a lot of grammatical errors that makes it rather hard to read. if you'd like some help fixing it up, i'd be glad to help you because it seems like a great start for a story.

i totally forgot to do a story alert lol i didnt notice i was on the last chapter. update soon please! great story.

i cant believe sirius got dezerae knocked up. tsk tsk

aw how sad

but who did james lose?

aww poor allie

hmm it seemed like lily had a stick up her butt for awhile in this chapter. but thats just me

still a good story tho

when will lily and james get together? or atleast admit their feelings for each other?