I really liked your story. You describe things well!

I think the story would be better if the characters were your own though.

Great Job!

Iris

P.S. I was rooting for Ron and Hermoine too. o)

That was alot better since you fixed it, but I still don't know who Lee is. Please tell us who this Lee person is.

Keep writing!

-Jaz

I really liked this time around! it made much more sense, esp. the part about the bottle and Lee. Thanks for fixing it!

Loved it! Just one minor detail, u wrote Lee for Ron! I know y, but u might want to change it and upload the chapter again! Great chappie!

It's good, but who is Lee? Is he Ron? And what happened to Hermione hitting sombody with a broken bottle?

-Jaz

WHAT? Omg! I usually dont like Harry/Hermione as I am a BIG shipper of Ron/Hermione. But for u I will make an exception! What in the world is Hermione doing? Has she gone crazy?

Manda

p.s. i would love to know about ur real story!

p.s.s. i noticed some wierd spelling mistakes. You repetly used the words hapquill and sRonp. PLz tell me y!

p.s.s.s. e-mail me!

you've done a pretty good job overall, but i would like to say that Madame Pomfrey is the only nurse. keep up the good work i would like to see where you take this story.

This is interesting, i like it! Well can't wait 4 another update!

This 'hapquill' and 'sRonp' thing is getting really annoying. Sort out your spellchecker or whatever. It's wrong!

KIU, Sam, it's quite good.

luv ya,

xxJPCxx

I want it, Sam! Send it to me!

I like this. I'm gonna read the next chappie. Poor Harry! Poor Ron! Poor Hermione! Why does she remember Ginny but no-one else? That's weird...

KIU, Sam!

luv ya,

xxJPCxx

YES! KILL HARRY OFF AND MAKE HERMIONE FALL IN LOVE WITH RON! uh. . . why do you keep writing hapquill when you mean happen and sRonp instead of sleep?

-Jaz

Write More! It's very good!

It's still good, but how could you do THAT to Ron. He didn't need to see that! I like it. Write more.

-Jaz

I love it. I think it would make a good story if you changed the names. I'm actually writing a story that I'm going to change the names in too. I would put it on FanFic, but I'm having trouble finding out how. I have to read the other two chapters you have written, but keep writing!

-Jaz

i like this

I love the plot, but that whole falling out of the tree thing was kind of. . . quick. It happened too fast and was kind of hard to understand. Other than that, the first part was good.

-Jaz