Reviews for Perfect World
Guest chapter 37 . 6/27/2015
nooooooo! its already over?! well..1st of all thank u for such an amazing fanfic...its been a while since i read something this good...i really like how you twist the plot of homura letting goku out b4 sanzo...also your way of showing the clear line of sanzo & goku& homura is nice...since i only read bout both sanzo x goku really...it kind of (at least in my opinion) you hit the spot on their characteristic...the character & story development was great...kind of like reading slice of life...hope u can write another great story
Emriel chapter 37 . 11/24/2014
This is so tragic. : I enjoyed reading it but for some reason I feel like... it could have gone better... It's so tragic. So tragic T_T
ladysakura31 chapter 37 . 4/24/2012
I just have to say WOW! If homura did end up getting goku first in the original story i could c it going this way too. U did an amazing job! And i hope the talks of a sequel to this are true cause i'll b waiting patiently :P
Tiger723 chapter 2 . 4/16/2012
nice idea about the story line where Homura finds goku instead of sanzo

:)
girru chapter 37 . 1/6/2012
Just wanted to thank you for this amazing story (and your other 39 stories I've already read). Given that two things are quite irritating to me in fandom - portraying of Goku and Seiten Taisei as totally different personalities, sometimes even different characters and Sanzo-group's enemies being ridiculously _evil_ - your fics were a breath of fresh air. Especially after I stumbled upon really idiotic Homura-rapist story:/

I hope you will write for Saiyuki again - either continue old or start new fics. Your portrayal of characters - especially in your latest fics, especially of 39 - is wonderfully IC (well, for my headcanon anyway). Thank you for writing it. &love
RoxasIsReal13 chapter 37 . 9/29/2011
I LOVED THIS. LOVED IT.
Rellwen chapter 3 . 6/23/2011
I've just begun your story but I find myself already addicted. I'm very picky about my fanfiction and this seems like it will be one of the ones I read obsesively.

I look forward to the next 34 chapters eager to see the plot unfold.

So far your writing has been thought through and your characterization near perfect. Your style is easy to read but with enough sophistication to draw the reader in.

I will be sure to post another review as soon as I finish the last chapter. And I'm sure It won't take me long.
Starfool chapter 37 . 4/26/2011
WOW! I love this! I really hope you do write a sequel (if you haven't done so already). Admittedly, I am a SanzoxGoku fan, but I have to say, I really enjoyed this. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Me-Nuriko chapter 37 . 12/4/2010
Seems I didn't follow this story to it's end. I was away from this, and other fandoms, for a looong while. Too much going on in real life. But now I'm back.

This story is as wonderfully written as all your works. Good characterization, good grammar, good spelling, unique plot. Only a few typos here and there. It's no wonder you managed to get a novel published, you definitely have talent. Good luck in the future.
aoinobara chapter 37 . 7/26/2010
ne, is this fic going to have a sequel? pls. pls. pls. do tell.

I'm really really fascinated by this story

hope for sanzo and goku next
Almecestris chapter 37 . 5/8/2010
Wow. It's been a hella long and angsty ride but this ending is totally worth it! Thanks for sharing this amazing story! Im off to the sequels :D
j bear chapter 37 . 4/15/2009
i just finished your story and i must say i was impressed. you got the characters down to pat and the plot was pretty good. plus, you actually finished it and your a good writer. _ it seems that every time i come across a good story the person never finishs it. :P anywho, loved you story and cant wait to read more of them!
nashinashi chapter 37 . 8/22/2008
Woah. What a compelling read. I found this fic and sat down and kept reading until I plowed through the whole thing. I don't think there's ever been another 37 chapters in a row that got my undivided attention like this.

I really appreciate the storytelling, the characterization, the pacing, the plot... The angst was so well written and not cheesily overdone, the characters were humanely flawed and you certainly succeeded with toyed with my feelings as a reader- swinging back and forth between empathizing and grudging against certain characters as they develop, for one.

Your writing, and your proper use of English is incredible (in all I think I've only caught 2 or so typos, and that is an amazingly small number for a fic of this scale). In fact, your writing sets such standards, that I'm getting nervous writing this review- I almost feel shameful for using improper grammar here!

Anyway, glad to have found this story and your writing, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Ash4life chapter 37 . 8/2/2008
ah i totally loved this (3rd time reading it) you matched there characterics (sp) great

if you were doing a sequel you should have hazel harass sanzo that be funny anyway though amazing story

thanks for writing
Stormbringer246 chapter 9 . 7/9/2008
Squee! Delightfully loving each and every chapter.

I've just come across one plot hole though... "That reminded him uncomfortably of his first and last encounter with Kanzeon Bosatsu." However, unless I'm mistaken (which is entirely possible) in your version this never happened because Sanzo never rushed infront of Goku to get stabbed in the gut to have her/him come down and do the blood transfusion.
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