Hahaha, you just gotta love Steve and Oscar! :D

You utter bastard Goldman

ROFL!

Nicely done, and an excellent bit of humorous writing. *Two Thumbs Up*

Oh, and NI!

LOL. This is too adorable! I can definitely see Oscar doing something like this, and Steve not getting it at first and thinking the worst of Oscar for it, until Oscar's real motives are explained to him.

And the ending is perfect.

ha! this is a fun, cute story! I'm a very frequent visitor to fanfiction, be it writing or reading, on several shows...when I began, I was sticking to a few specific shows, but recently, I've become TOTALLY OBSESSED with basically everything "lee majors"...so that means reading and writing, The Big Valley, The Fall Guy, and of course The Six Million Dollar Man! Well, today was my first check of this show, and I am appalled! There are just like 5 stories for this iconic show! I know there are many young fanfic writers, who wouldn't be interested in this type of thing (as I am a young writer myself..) but there are definitely many people who I think would write for this show, and I'm shocked that no one has written more than a couple of these stories! I thank you for your input into the page, and hope to read some more...sometime! Thanks for the piece! It's great!

RAEBNC - Read And Enjoyed, But No Comment, other than I loved how Callahan could always find Oscar.

Very nice.

Not being a fan of MPFC, I had no chance to solve this. Still, it was a good one, and somehow I can just see Oscar pulling something like that.

i really like the six million dollar man he is really awsum and i think that you shood write more stories because you are really talltented

Loved it. Really good sense of humor and very much in character. The only criticism is the word should be pillar, not piller. Otherwise a really good job.

this is the start of a deacent story, but there are a couple of little changes, you could make to strengthen the continuity:

1. when you change scene have a heading, I got confused as to where the events where takeing place and the time diffrence between them.

2. check you work, you missed words out which caused me to stumble at points in your text.

OMG, that was so good! Being an OG fan and a secret agent for MPFC, I of course had to love this!

I'm hoping and praying people don't spoil it in the reviews!

(BTW: That's John Philip Sousa and the Liberty Bell March...)

Original! I loved it!

That's funny-I love this story!

You got the man's dry humor just right-this is so-off the wall perfect!

MPFC-very good-I'll have to use this at work!

Thanks for the good read!

i loved that! it was funny and i could almost see oscar sitting there behind his desk discussing mpfc with an aspiring field agent... great!