have you forgotten this fic? if not please continue!

i agree that the original version of this fic started out better, but im looking forward to how this one turns out. you have such a detailed style at capturing emotions, i love it! i liked how the last one started, but got sick of the b/r that kept going and chapters that were somewhat pointless and boring. i prefer k/r but am open-minded if its a good fic, but nothing was going on for chapters at a time and i really dont think ron and bonnie would ever be like that(my opinion). the times with drakken and shego, the whole perfect soldier upgrade, those were good.i hope you have more to do with that and what they were doing, also put ron in a more bad guy position. he spoke of them being family and then it just got dropped somewhere along,that was sad. i like angsty/evil ron fics(does that make me sound bad?) the fic got better and kept getting progressivly more so after chapter 18 i believe. by the time it ended i was glad to know a remake fic and a sequel were on the way. i hope im not just bugging you and may be of some help. this is not a flame(i dont do those), and im looking forward for more! thanks for the wonderful fics you write and know that i am a true fan of them!

Well, I'll add an alert for this too. Can't get too much of the Ron/Bon goodness. )

Cursed20,

Guess I have to revise my initial review of this story. This rewrite is better. It's got more depth, better imagery and creates such a complete scene I can practically Kim and Ron's voices.

I think you're doing the right in re-writing this, for what it's worth. I did the same thing with my story and produced what I think was a better product.

I'll be looking forward to future chapters

One last thing and I'll shaddup. I noticed a flame review for the original version of this story. Said reviewer has not written anything which leads me to questions how he or she has the authority to question your writing style.

I recieved a similiar flame from an anonymous writer early on in my writing. A piece of advice, consider the source. Take the valid criticism and discard the rest

Keep up the good work!

I'm really liking the story... I was crying at the end of the first story and can't wait to see what's coming next. Keep it up!

'Kay, first off: will there be more? I just started reading KP fics, and I liked the ideas in this one, but I'd like it even better if it was finished. :)

Um...I know it's PG-13, but I don't think Ron thinks like that. Come on, he's a pure-hearted boy.

Updates, please?

LOL!

hm. I haven't read the original. But i like your writing. it's smooth and the pace is steady. I like.

go on! I'm waiting.

PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPPIE! AWESOME! PLZ PLZ PLZ!

why start over agin without finishing the original? i was really getting into the old story- heck- i was hoping that bonnie and ron get together! but hey, so long as you keep the story going, you're doing great!

Nice build up of the Kim/Ron/Bonnie dynamic. I'm sure it must be really bumming KP out trying to workout what she's done to upset Ron so much. This version KP seem alot more oblivious then your other one. Great continuation. :-)

i cant feel the pain, the anger,

i like the original is beter a lot

hey men the new story sucs, please back to original, i cant wait for more

hey men you really know writing, i mean i try to write a fanfiction several times but all of them sucks i want you upload soon.

i dont like you began the history again the lasst one are really good and i want more but is your histry so i only can give you a congratulation for this

upload soon (please)

p.d. sorry about my ingish (it suck) but i am latin.

chau

I am greatly enjoying this revised edition.

This one seems to be a little darker (I'm not positive though, my memory is so horrible, I can't quite remember how the first chapter of the original went. Sorry), but nonetheless is excellent.

Can't wait to see where you take this.

Poor Ron, poor Kim, update soon please.