I found this story and I thought: Wow. What a great story! And then I realised that you hadn't updated in ages... And got sad. Either you have got immense writer's block, you don't have time, or you've died. Hopefully not the latter! Lol. Anyway you should really update this story and keep updating because this is one of the best stories in the whole Golden Sun section of this website!

I've just been reading your story, and can I just say you have a natural flair for writing-

Sheba: I love that bit with me and Felix!

And I noticed that you have decided Eoleo is a earth adept. I honestly dont know whether he's earth or fire but who cares? And you said that Sheba's eyes are blue. Most people either say it's purple or green, I personally prefer to say green.

Tetra: And why is it that only one Djinni stayed behind? Flora: And why did it choose to stay with Felix?

Then there's the issue of Sheba herself. She's so... well... unShebaish. It doesn't really seem like it is Sheba. Wait! I got it! It ISN'T Sheba! Or is she just pissed because she hasn't seen Felix for years?

Anyway, please hurry up and update (I notice you haven't done that in a while!) because this is a fantasic story!

Sheba: Keep going with a MeXFelix pairing!

Flora: We love your story!

Tetra: Update soon!

Nice. Some of your sentences seem a bit awkward and in need of revision, such as "In addition to the graphic illustration Picard has just mentioned, along with his stomach churning from who knows what being inserted there, Adrian found no difficulty in letting loose.", which also contains a poorly-placed line break. I am pleased that you included Eoleo and gave him a specific element (or did you? In New Dawn he's going to be a quadrelemental). Still, a nice job.

Another great chapter. I like that flashback scene with Felix and Sheba. Wind Chaser's a good name for the ship. Confusion: Why doesn't Sheba teleport to Tolbi on her own? Doesn't she have the Lapis? I like how you're doing Iodem. Great writing, keep it up.

E! (blinks several times rapidly) Was that me? That wan't me, was it?

You're here too! This fic on GSR, which I found a month ago, was the first fanfic I read, and ultimately led me to this site. Unfortunately, there I couldn't get to the last two chapters. Hopefully that won't be the case here.

Scanning for comments... Adepts near all the lighthouses. Probably from that baby in Contigo? That reminds me, why is there no Venus Clan in Lalivero to protect the lighthouse? I've always wondered. Nice job capturing Kraden's dry writing style. I like the Venus Parchment idea. Are you going to have the Djinn come back? Poor wolf! So, Alex is going to be here, too... Possibilities! Is the second Alex scene a flashback or a vision of distant past? And does this mean that Deadbeard will also show up? Nice, kept Sean and Ouranos on as protectors. How did they kill the Kraken? Was there a second one, or did it slink away to recover after the thrashing from Isaac (three rounds last time!)? If someone stabbed me with a trident, I'd think I'd be upset with him. One thing in chapter 8: the Great Gagomba said that it would also give the Tomegathericon to Akafubu if he showed up. Just thought you might like to correct that. Nice characterization for Kamarami. You'll hear from me again.

Flora:Whats up with Sheba? Is she annoyed that no one came to visit her?

Vixen:Will she and Felix kiss and make up?

Flora:On with the story!

Vixen:Go Felix and Sheba!

Love the story, especially the Felix Sheba interaction! I hope you update soon!

That was a cool chapter!

I had to laugh at that teleporting bit, when Picard kindly tells us "Sometimes the reformation process has a little difficulty reforming foreign objects in your body. So with a full stomach, the food tends to pop up all over the digestive tract, from all places of the digestive tract."

I never imagined teleporting would be so nauseous!

I was really looking forward to seeing what Hydros had to say, but then you make us wait for the enxt chapter! Ah well, good things come to those who wait, so I'll wait patiently.

Don't keep us waiting too long! Nah, just kidding, take as long as you like... I'm patient!

I still like your story. Keep up the good work!

I want more! This story rocks!

If you're wondering why I'm reviewing Chapter 8 instead of 9, its because my comps being wierd and gives me script errors when I try to review chapter 9. Wierd.

Anway, #9 was cool! LOVED that scene with Sheba and Felix! I LOVE that pairing as much as Isaac/Jenna!

That Hall of Order seems like a really good idea. I'm interested to see what happens with that...

By the way, thank you for your thanks. I simply had to review a fic that I'd already read on GSR. Anyhoo, keep on writing!

Wow! I think this is probably the best chapter so far )

I like what happened between Felix and Sheba )

Can i just ask though, how is it that Piers (Sorry, Picard) is living in Lemuria, when Conservato told him that he could never return if he left again, in GS2?

Look forward to reading the next chapter!

-Cerise

Hiya! I can't believe that i am only the thrid person to review this!

You're a genius!

I love the relationship between Jenna and Isaac. I think it's great that they're parent too. I've only read the three chapters so far. I'm just about to read chapter 4. My only problem is that i can't read 'em quick enough! I'm looking forward to everyone meeting!

Keep it up! Lv Cerise )

Hey, this story rocks! I think you've got the characters personalities down pretty good, I like Jenna's relationship with Isaac.

You were really paying attention when playin the game, too. Heck, it was only 'till I read chapt 5 that I realised the Stone of Sages didn't form!

Oh, something I did notice in chapt 1 though, you call Picard 'Piers' at one point. Heh, anyway, nice work! Keep it up!

Sorry for not reviewing lately. COmputer broke. Oh well.

ANyway, it was great to finally read a new chapter! And this rocked! It's great to have Garet back in, although I admit I can't wait to find out whats happening with Isaac and co. You have me thoroughly interested in this story, if you stopped, I dont know what I'd do!

Keep writing, please! This is such a good story!