Yo so ima just ask real quick, what's the pairing/ship for this story and brave new world?

Nothing has ever given me mood whiplash like this, and at a constant rate like this fic. One moment there's torture and cannibalism, next scene there's a cheerio eating contest that goes on for around half of a page when suddenly at out nowhere and commit mass genocide. There are some scenes that should be depressing but are written oddly comically, like Charizard dropping and killing his child. That feels like something from Shrek 3's King Harold death scene. It was not a good scene. Anyway, venting aside, this is a good story and the mood whiplash does work on occasion. I know this review makes it seem like this is a negative review, and it technically is, but well written and enjoyable.

this just become a horror story

godzilla comes up and roar at her latias try to attack godzilla but failed to attack then godzilla use his atomic breath as an attack but failed latias attack but failed godzilla use his atomic breath again soon latias fled from godzilla he swim away

It's been a long time since I've seen an arc that makes up a few chapters. This must be the case where anyone can die happens? You sure did kill a lot of characters in this arc and their deaths are pretty shocking and gory that most of them weren't sad but some were sad because of the way they said over their corpses. The saddest is Kasurin's death, that death made the happiest and happy-go-lucky character of the bunch to breakdown and filled with sorrow. It always pains me seeing a happy-go-lucky character who is the comic relief breakdown like that.

Isaac: Achoo!

Kichiro (Dynasmon): Gesundheit!

Damn, I wanted to kick Ford's ass since he is deeply insane that he became annoying and one of my despised attributes for character qualities is a character with a corrupted sense of justice and good that they think they're always right (The reason why I hate Patroklos Alexander from Soulcalibur V and, to add fuel to the fire, he is the game's protagonist and has no Character Development). I just hope he gets a death as satisfying as Bitch. The only good thing about the new villain is his Blaziken. His Blaziken has the qualities of a villain and not as annoying as Ford. The battle with Charizard was intense and epic that, if I were to rank the villains, Blaziken is somewhere at the top 5 with Shalor, the Devil, Mewgle, and Deoxys. Sadly, Ford is at the lower rank.

The battle with the rangers...I just realized that they were like Power Rangers S.P.D. (One of my favorite Power Rangers when I was a kid) since most of them are nearly similar to the Rangers they represent (Based on what I remembered), they're part of the police, lock their enemies in cards, have numbers on their suits and wearing black jackets in their next form like S.W.A.T. Mode, the Red Ranger has the robot dog for his Super Mode, the Yellow Ranger has the doppelganger power like Z, the Green Ranger is as silly as Bridge (My favorite Ranger at that time), Ford is like Doggy Kruger, and they use an acronym instead than an abbreviation.

...Steven Stone...The first Champion I've beaten since I was a kid since my first Pokemon game was Ruby. He was killed during the battle and didn't received a proper burial along the rest of his Pokemon when the Devil destroyed the island. This wasn't the first time I've seen Steven died, I saw him died in the Pokemon Adventures Manga but his Pokemon weren't killed yet at that part. So that's how you see the insides of an Aggron...*Grabs something shining and enters a portal*

*Isaac, Reisen, and Kichiro's Co'ed Dorm*

Isaac (Aggron): *Enters his room tiredly with a sigh* Today was a 'ard yakka. 'Eaps of 'omework, quizzes, P45's writer's block Sheds, and yakka yakka at Maccas... *Was about to go to his study bed that can support his weight when the lights went out* Bloody 'ell! Didn't Kichiro paid the bills? *Tries to turn on the lights but can't* ...Not so bonza... *Uses Thunder Punch to produce light and turns the knob* Eh, locked from the outside...Bloody 'ell... *Hears a noise* Eh... *Summons Rhongomyniad* 'ose thar? Show yarself! *A blinding light swallowed him that he swung his spear to shield his eyes, it took him a several minutes as electricity returned* Eh? *Looks down at his bed and sees a present*

I wonder if he'll like it. I made him a Butt-Monkey in my stories so I should give him better treatment. Wonder why I made powerful characters Butt-Monkeys. Speaking of Butt-Monkeys, Brock...Ever the loser you made him to be since the events that happened in this story made him look pathetic unlike how he is in the anime, a badass and competent one in there. Though I think this is based on their interruption in their journey that they weren't given enough character development that made them more competent in the show.

Isaac: *Opens the gift and sees that it was the latest eroge video game that he always wanted* P45 *Tears fall down his eyes* Thank you so much! *Looks at the box and red fluid went down his nose on seeing the box art*

Well, he does have blood despite being an Aggron who got his Rock-typing altered to Electric...Not much of his body changed.

Isaac: *Playing the video game in his game console with the lights off*

It is a good thing they don't have classes tomorrow...Still, your characters can break the fourth wall, why haven't I seen them yet in the medium aside from BlackWarGreymon?

Well, you once again did the Kick the Dog moment with May. Just when she was about to find love, the boy she liked died brutally near her by her very eyes that she fell into despair and, before that, she was broken by the Alpha Ranger...I think I feel bad for always giving this moment to Alex that I made him go through the 3 stages of depression (Going back and forth at the first two and went to the third when something happened) and was stuck at the 4th stage for 8 years and so.

The battle to reach the top is okay, the best thing there was the battle between Charizard and Blaziken, and I really like seeing Lucy in action. She's totally the best of the bunch and I always love that spiked boots of hers ready to kick some ass.

Harrison still made a dumb move. He should know by now that his father was past the morals and is no longer the man he knew yet he still went there to bring him back. He got killed in the process...I facepalmed when that happened but the amount of shock he saw in that moment made him brain dead and did something stupid that caused him his life.

The Ranger battles were amusing with the fight with Red Ranger being climatic. The last battle made me shout "WHAT?!" by how Ford becoming Shining Ranger made him a powerful villain and was defeated after five minutes. Not to mention the funniest thing happened when after that battle, they proceeded to beat the crap out of the villains.

Latias...She got her development after she was pulled to the sidelines for other characters to develop (Which I like) and man she became a badass. One of the reasons why you shouldn't mess with nice and cute dragons, they'll be able to kick your ass when they awaken their power to their true extent.

Sky and Nariaki (Jesmon): Achoo!

It is pretty sad to what happened to Charizard, but it is a good thing you didn't kill him now and he'll be alright.

Mewtwo and Gardevoir reunion is sweet since it has been a long time they were separated and seeing them together again was nice. The ending was worrying and I hope there won't be a Kick the Dog moment like you used to do...You won't do it again right?

Millennia old yet still immature...Groudon...I thought a High Elf Archer who is 2,000 years old and a high ranked adventurer who is pretty naive about goblins and the most immature of her party was worse. Still bicker like an old couple, Kyogre and Groudon...Like how I envisioned them both with Kyogre being the more mature of the two. I wonder how will their baby will look like. *Imagines a-* NOPE!

...Wow, after an epic war from the previous chapter...It was succeeded by a stupid but funny chapter. However, judging from the names of the next chapters by the directory, I have a feeling that this will be the last chapter that is full of shenanigans. The effect of Cerebus is making it full drama right?

Wobbuffet...He can now rival Shinji Ikari from Neon Genesis Evangelion and my own Alphamon OC, Alex Gradalpha, as the most depressed character. Seriously, seeing everything he wanted to make amends with to be free destroyed by someone whom he betrayed. He also lost his girlfriend and sister there that he has no longer to go to and the only friend he has left is Cacturne and I don't know what can bring him back to normal again...Therapy can't help him.

Anyways, damn it Ash! Why do you sound like Sky (Salamence OC)? I know wearing formal attire is uncomfortable and itchy but do you know it is needed to attend an obliged party? Not to mention I had to wear an attire made of fabric (Which is very itchy) but had to bear with it since it is an obligation. You should do it for your girlfriend at least and Sky's case is justified since he is naturally naked and not used to wearing clothes.

Wow, Wes sure did grew to adopt to those shenanigans. A serious badass character...Entering a world full of shenanigans. Unlike breaking down like he used to in the Tyranitron Arc, he decided to deal with it and joined in the fun. Still, I wonder what went wrong to his Umbreon's mind to make him dance I'm Too Sexy by Right Said Fred and I can't believe I missed that Latias sang "Otherworld" from Final Fantasy X during the Mary Sues Arc but knew this...I never really memorize the entire lyrics since it sounds gibberish when sang in Death Metal (I like Dancing Mad better though). He also took Zoro's (Diego?) horse to get away but I know he cannot escape Rui.

Pikachu and Sadic...Wow, I think I'm starting to like this pairing since Sadic stalks Pikachu in a creepy but funny way. They also have sex in the Comfort Room and Pikachu now falls in love with Sadic because of this and I just hope Sadic isn't obsessed with Pikachu that she sleeps with a body pillow or plushie of him. That thing is creepy but having both of those while sleeping is...Oh my.

Grace (Gardevoir OC): *Sleeping and hugging an Earwyn (Swampert OC) body pillow and an Earwyn plushie she made herself* Achoo!

Brock dressed as Venus and Professor Ivy was a man...I'm having flashbacks of Alex using the improved Alpha inForce to transform himself and every male Royal Knight (Except Ryuunosuke) to gender-bent humanized version of themselves to distract me and write the prologue of my story. What should I do to remove Brock's mental problem? It is getting worse than seeing Alex's version of the Sexy Jutsu.

Carrie, she seems pretty interesting and reminds me of the character Marie from Final Fantasy Brave Exvius. Prodigies in their field and are cheerful and teasing character. However, they possess calculating minds of how people think and feel that they tend to research their emotions.

Not to mention Break the Cutie moments to Phanpy...Twice! I know he followed a cliche where someone is making erotic sounds with someone else that they are having trouble doing something else but them doing in a bathroom? Phanpy should have been careful. Then it happened again with Crawdaunt being able to travel to the future where I began being a writer and found my secret of using Shiny Shuckle juice (Pokemon Episode "A Better Pill to Swallow") and TM45 (Teaches "Attract") together to attract a large harem. Geez! stopped there and it is a good thing Sky wasn't here when I read this since...The last time he saw something this erotic made him use Dragon's Awakening Delta (His most powerful skill as it doubles every stats, replenishes MP and SP, increase Elemental Resist, and a protective barrier to Status Ailments to every allies while giving the opposite effect to the enemies) in the entire area. The worst part is that it was stronger and everyone received, except him, the Debuff. The perpetrators were buried under a mountain after that and Yukari had to erase his memories of that event.

I wonder if Jirachi was watching a Kingdom Hearts movie (I don't really know since the brown-hair boy hero I know who drowns when Destiny Island sinks and wields a sword to defeat a shadow of himself is Sora) or I don't know. If it was a Kingdom Hearts movie, take my money!

The scene with Charizard and Charla was so sweet. I'm imagining the ending of The Legend of Renamon: The Wind Waker when seeing their flight scene.

Also, Latias and Gardevoir scene was heartwarming. Pretty much a scene of two friends who just became friends before being separated and it is nice to see the two of them bond. Not to mention with their ending scene together, Carla was drawing a fanart of Latias, Rayquaza, Mewtwo, and Gardevoir sitting at the volcano and watching the stars together. The fanart has Gardevoir not wearing the mask since Carla said that she looks like a monster at the outside but a beauty in the inside and being accepted by your friends makes that beauty surface and the monster ignored.

Drew seems to develop and lose his arrogance. I think it has something to do being Tuxedo Masquerain. Not to mention the ending tells me something terrible is about to happen.

The chapter is funny, but I still find the RPGenerator Arc funnier but this has more heartwarming moments than that arc. It is pretty impressive how you reached 50 chapters with many words per chapter. I wish I could be as good as you.

Whew, what a battle and it was intense. The war between them are good and really shows that jerkass Shedninja's power. Fighting to protect the Weather Trio as they return to the mortal world. I wonder how powerful is this Devil since he was shown to be powerful when he fought Molly and damn his power is so strong.

Shedninja...I think I see some Character Development with him. He started as a Blood Knight who enjoys killing as he appears to feel no other emotions than that. But after seeing Misdreavus' death, he began to feel emotions, which is despair over losing a loved. I think Shedninja might get some points for likability and love can even make someone with no emotions become better people. Still, he seems special since he didn't die with one hit since Shedninja tend to have only one HP and takes no damage from most types.

Tyson: ACHOO! *The snot flew into the air* Damn, it is cold here. *Gets hit by a 10ft long Spectral Sword*

Hexcalibur: *Wiping the snot from the Typhlosion that landed on his hilt. He was watching a video feed of a hacked security camera from a laptop of an Anime Convention where Carla was attending in her human form with Grace* No jackass should ever touch her.

Coldstone, the fused Regice and Regirock...That Pokemon has the worst Typing ever. Rock/Ice is the worst Type combination since it has numerous weaknesses to the most common Types in PVP and to good offensive Types. Not to mention that both of them are slow and their High Defense and Special Defense falter those Stats. Though for them, they're protected by that core that held them together makes that weakness nulled as it regenerates their body. But destroying the core can kill them permanently...Wow, that reminds me of how to take down an Aragami.

Shalor (Giovanni's copy) and his Star Wars-style combat. Using Lightsabers in battle and dual wields them but having four arms make him appear like General Grievous. I am also a Star Wars fan and I need to rewatch the Star Wars cartoons since I missed them. A Pikachu vs Shalor battle? I would love to see that. One sword vs four swords. Shalor is my favorite among the villains and the Devil is just behind him.

The Devil is an interesting villain as he is the personification of everything evil and how he defeats his opponents by not only his power alone but his wit and trolling skills. Not to mention that Blazblue's villain, Yuki Terumi, is nearly the same and his hateable character makes him one of my favorite villains list. His Astral Heat (A.K.A. Instant Kill Move or Finisher) involves trapping the opponent and brutally stab them with multiple knives before transforming to his true form and strike the opponent that shatters them to pieces. His role in the story makes him a great villain.

So...Meowth killed most of the people of the Wynaut Island. Way to kick the dog! Wobuffet was able to return the Wobakku statue and after a few chapters, Meowth destroyed everything he hoped to redeem himself to the people. Geez! *Puts out a gourmet spaghetti from a shell of Ambrosius* Guess I think Grace's food will cure me.

Lucas: *Appears from a portal and rushes to Parousia45's side* Hold! *Touches his head to manipulate his emotions so that he'll be happy again, however, he already ate the spaghetti* UFF! *Tries his best to absorb the flavor that enters he felt through Parousia45's aura before fainting*

*A portal opens and Ryuunosuke appears to get Lucas and the shell back before returning*

*Didn't recognize Ryuunosuke* Huh? Well, I guess her food helped me.

Kyogre and Groudon interaction...Looks like they're possible to become a couple. I don't know why I always shipped those two even when they were rivals and based on the figures Behemoth and Leviathan (I wonder why I made a powerful character a Butt Monkey and he's my second favorite Summon) who wanted to kill each other. Well, I pretty much reduced them as a loving couple who tend to bicker but in a lighthearted way (Kyogre is serious while Groudon's an airhead). Seriously Groudon, I wonder why you inherited Earwyn's taste buds, you seriously wanted to eat decaying corpse of an undead despite everyone's warning and killed the mood by that?

Looks like Mew and Celebi saved the day. They saved everyone from the Devil's missile. I should really look more closely from the hints and the pink and green fur came from them. Didn't think of that until I've read more closely about Time Manipulation and Teleportation and the next chapter's reply section.

All-in-all, the chapter is less horrifying despite imagining the grotesque monsters and some deaths to none-Ghost characters. This chapter is mainly more about character development and the action is pretty cool. We now see Rukario (Lucario, damn dub name change), Lucario is one of my favorite Pokemon and it is nice to see one in the story. Registeel putting an end to Coldstone was epic. The Weather Trio (My favorite Trio) are back baby!

Absol met a giant fire-breathing turtle? Lol, that could be Bowser or Turtonator! They got so lost they went all the way to Alola!

This battle was a lot of fun now that Alolan Persian is a thing and is Dark-type! I also forgot that this story was written all the way back in 2004. I like rereading the beginning and comparing how different (and similar) it is to your stories up to 14 years later!

Oh Crawdaunt. I knew you and Corsola won't last long because of your perviness and the way you act crude. Man he became salty at the result and I've seen it coming a mile way Crawdaunt.

Damn those anime parodies. Of course the main character of Lu-Gi-Oh is a Lugia who dresses like Yugi. Too bad Kaiba isn't a Pokemon who dressed like him and is a human instead. I wonder about how humans and Pokemon live in that world. I still wonder why Kyogre was Lugi's first priority than Groudon and Rayquaza that he sacrificed both of them to her to make her more powerful. I'm just until the episode where they finished the simulation RPG world (Like the RPGenerator) so I think I haven't watched the episode it parodied.

Not mention I raged so much when I read Asshole and Bitch are in this chapter. I hate them so much that I can destroy an entire city in the fictional worlds. They're annoying and I cannot read properly without screaming in agony in their scenes but this chapter was satisfying. The battle between Ash and Berry are awesome and funny with the badass Pikachu in the end and man he can take hits (Unlike in the anime where he is a Glass Cannon). The way they breakdown with consecutive loses and the humiliating actions Bitch took to destruct her was awesome. Though I wonder why you tend to sacrifice Charizard when things get to become intense since Charizard is one of Ash's most powerful Pokemon. Also, Bitch's death is so satisfying but Pika Pika's death is a bit sad since she's a being born without a purpose and all she wanted was death. But it was all good with some funny moments and great action. I also kept on rereading Bitch's death. Mwahahaha.

Yay! Gardevoir and Sadic are back. It is good to see them again and I thought Xavier's masochism creeps me out. Sadic is purely creepy and it does fit her name. Manyula...I think you finished this chapter some time after Diamond and Pearl's release since you used the Japanese name than the translated name, Weavile, and you shown in her cameo at Chapter 40 that she evolved. I like the Weavile-line, they have cool designs and good Glass Cannons but are sinister predators. It is nice to see Gardevoir happy again and gave Bitch a false sense of hope...

All of these were made possible because of Rayquaza. I can't wait to see their reunion and all. *Spits out tons of blood* I feel all of my bones broken *Falls over unconscious*

*Behind Parousia45 are every Elementals standing in a city ruins wearing bandages*

Alfred: P45 loves to review stories that it will be the death of him. It is a good thing Leiru teleported him to a non-residential ghost city to vent out his rage before P45 knocked him unconscious. A rage he cannot suppress by singing Death Metal with Gabriel. Though we have to break all of his bones to calm him down but since we're fictional, it won't kill him.

Yu: Despite everything we did? *Looks at the destruction they made in their fight with some pieces of a skyscraper falling on top of Leviathan* I should bury Levi out.

Alfred: Damn...

Christopher: *Sitting on a chair beside a small round table with a cup of tea from a distance away from the city* Kids these days. *Looks at the opposite side and sees BlackWarGreymon* Looks like you've came to visit our world again. Though I feel anxious seeing you since I remember an orange version of you brutally murder someone of my species and his trainer when our author watched Death Battle. It also traumatized him for seeing his childhood kill each other.

Carla: *Covered in bandages and hugging BlackWarGreymon* It is good to see you again BWG!

Sylvia: You shouldn't talk too fast and go on talking for the next 24 hours. It is no wonder you scare them.

Yeah, knew it. A light-hearted chapter then an intense and horrifying chapter pattern was played here and damn this chapter is very intense. This time, it showed the most powerful characters of both sides: Molly and the Devil.

The whole chapter is mainly a psychological and might battle which I like and one of the things I love Puella Magi Madoka Magica (Not as gory though) and Tokyo Ghoul (The violence being as gory as that) between the two and it is impressive. Also talked about how power being given at the wrong hands can lead into this that no one can keep them at bay unless that person can control that power by themselves. The battle of the zombiefied Legendary Beasts and the Crystal Beasts (Poor Eusine, despite being Oniichan he is still a Butt Monkey) is cool but the downside was the design of the Legendary Beasts, which are just a gorier version of them and I would have find it cooler if there were symbolisms of their designs...Well, the Devil's view is like that and they do look like the Damned in Dante's Inferno so they should creep that but that is just my opinion. I think those zombiefied Legendary Beasts were hypocrites since they called the Crystal Beasts "Copies" since the Legendary Beasts are already dead and they just took their form and image in a grotesque form.

Molly...She was the next Lucy. She was too young but that power she has was too powerful that she might become even more powerful than the Devil with enough practice. However, she also abused the power she had and damn that was wicked. She mind controlled people to like her, the events that happened in the Pokemon movie, and also raped Ash for an entire week (Crap! So that means he isn't a virgin anymore) that are way too much for someone her age. Then the battle between her and the Devil happened and it reminds me of some Anime battle I've seen before. The ending reminds me of the ending of Lucy, she used too much of her power's potential that her body disappeared and became somewhat of a god or a powerful entity with no physical form. Well, kids with great powers tend to suffer a lot, seen it a lot and made some too.

I think things are about to go downhill from here on out and I feel I'll fall into despair since something bad will happen to Wobbuffet and co...Wait, why am I holding a metallic ice cream container? *Opens the lid and sees Alex's dish inside* Hold on, this is a shell of Ambrosius...Ryuunosuke's special ammo. I better bring it back. *Enters a portal and into Camelot's kitchen, returning the shell inside the freezer*

Examon: *Wearing his everyday clothes and an apron saying "Dragon Emperor III"* Hey!

Ryuunosuke! *Notices that there are others inside the kitchen* What are you guys doing here?

Examon: Cooking for one of your friend's birthday. It's her birthday tomorrow right?

Yeah...Well, thanks for doing it guys. I appreciate it even though your dishes can only be taken with some imagination since we're inside the comment box...Bye! *Leaves*

Examon: *Looks at Earwyn* He stole one of my ammo again did he?

Earwyn: Yeah, but they taste good. You should try them Ryuunosuke.

Examon: 'How can he be a great cook despite having terrible taste buds?'

Whoa, I got to say that I like this chapter because of the battle, May's character development, and introduction of Zoro. The training montage of Ash's Pokemon is funny with several insane shenanigans (I find the scene with Beautifly and Bayleef relatable when I played Touhou for the first time, I reacted like that when I fought Hong Meiling a.k.a. China. Her patterns aren't difficult to dodge, but her bullets are colorful and beautiful that I get destructed by their beauty) and Pokerocker's fashion sense. I enjoyed everything that happened in it and I find the confession scene makes Ash in-character as an idiot to love. Though too bad Latias got a bit of spotlight even when she's the main character. But hey, the protagonist can't get all the spotlight.

I find writing female characters a challenge, though the confession scene showed some character development on Misty too. Like it was said before, Misty is a bit insecure when she found out that there are other people (In this case, Pokemon) who like Ash but gotten over it when they found out they can't have him that she got a little tinge of jealousy. But over time, she finally understands what the other girls feel and how painful they felt when they knew their love is hopeless to win that person's heart. With that, she helped May too by letting her kiss her boyfriend just for her to know if there is still love and help her move on. Also, that moment when May kicked Drew's ass was amazing. Drew was so out-of-character because of his off-screen development that I want to kick his womanizing ass and not to mention his judging style is irritating and biased. (I'm not sure if Carla and BlackWarGreymon should be a couple in these sections. Since he is not my OC that I can't make out what he is saying and I only can make out his gestures. Also, I'm not sure if he can keep up with a cranky Aegislash and a masochistic Hydreigon love triangle Carla is trapped in)

Hehe, I love Lombre's Spanish and how Mudkip takes all of this (Funny, since in the anime, Mudkip can possibly a guy since when it evolved into Marshtomp, it flirted with the Flaafy like how Brock does it). The way Lombre tossed his girlfriend for him to fight Pikachu was funny and how he is a troll just to look cool and use it as a way to help Pikachu get better. What's wrong with dating a Mud Fish Pokemon Lombre? I mean, they're awesome. *May be a biased opinion since the Mudkip-line has been Parousia45's favorite Pokemon since he was 6 years old when he started Pokemon and he is 19 turning 20 today*

The battle is very good and both Ash's and Zoro's Pokemon are amazing though I face faulted during the battle of Crawdaunt and El Toro, the epic battle was dishonored by Crawdaunt's rudeness and vulgarity. The battle of Charizard and Rosa was impressive and Rosa was a beautiful fighter with a gist of a Bullet Hell fighter that reminds me of Touhou girls (Well, MOST characters of that game are girls and 3, not counting background characters and the men in the radio drama, men) and those fighting styles are among the things I like of a female character's fighting style beautiful and graceful but dangerous (See Grace and Sylvia). What takes the cake of the battle is the Pikachu vs El Gato la Espada fight. I always love a battle of swordplay and it is one of the reason I love Final Fantasy's battles in the movie despite it not being good story-wise since it is full of plot holes but the novellas and drama radios are good. The way how it is written is long and exciting that I never stopped reading until I finish the entire fight that ended with a draw. The end made it an awesome ending with Zoro showing Ash respect after his antagonism at the arc's opening. I also like a bit of nostalgia that the Contests are better than the ones they done in the games. Also feels like the time when Ash entered the Contest for his Aipom in Sinnoh. Though if I were to enter that competition, I wonder what the judges will love more of a Pokemon with a dance-like fighting style: A breakdancing Swampert using a large sword with a chain attached to its pommel that is bigger than himself or a ballerina Gardevoir with an improvised Psyshock that takes form of dancing swords or use it with her kicks.

The arc is good and I think this is tied to the Emerald Towers Arc (Or is it Wes Arc?) because of the humor and battles it has and a bit of character development of May. Though I just recognized a pattern of the second part. First, it is a lighthearted chapter, then the next will be very dark that I am having flashbacks of how a Dimensional War is. The pattern goes on until the final arc so that means...Here comes Nightmare Fuel land. Well, if anything depressing happens, I wonder what will happen to me...Maybe I'll eat Ryuunosuke's ammunition supply of Athena's, Grace's, and Alex's dishes...Hehe, like that will happen. Their dishes are among the dimension's greatest fear and nobody ever survived them...Except for their cooks and Earwyn...I wonder what's wrong with their taste buds.

God/Arcues/Yggdrasil/Cosmos/Chaos/Minerva/Materia/Spiritus/Rose Neo/Cier Qurecrone/Master Unit: Amaterasu damn it. Why am I reminded of that bitch in Snowpoint City by looking at the villain of the story? He can compete for Yuki Terumi (Villain of BlazBlue) as the biggest troll villain in existence in the dimension since both get stronger from human emotions (The Evil One with despair while Terumi with hatred) and not to mention they always have sadistic laughs when they see people suffering from those emotions. He experimented Lugia's love for his family that he made a speech that made Lugia's shadow surface and screwed his mind. Not only that, he also made Lugia fall into an endless cycle of suicides in numerous gory ways while making James suffer. Geez, and I thought a time loop where the person who always die in every timeline (Somewhere about a thousand times and still counting) and is conscious of every death was terrible. This villain is a complete sadistic monster and a big troll.

A cameo of Brendan and here I was hoping from previous chapters that May may move on and find interest in Brendan instead. Didn't realize he was gay and is in a relationship with Wally. Phew, it is a good thing HOPE's shenanigans since I don't want what faith will happen when May talked about sexuality. A low blow you did there May...*Hears a sniffle* Carla, why are you crying?

Carla: A ship I was expecting to sail sunk already before it could sail. LJ May won't be able to find love sooner because of Brendan not being able return her affection.

But, I thought you've always been a Yaoi shipper for the majority?

Carla: I plan to abandon my love for Yaoi for someone to love who they are. Oh LJ May, even though I have a two percent of myself wanted her to feel Oya's wrath. WWWAAAAAAAAHHH!

*In a distance, a BlackWarGreymon climbed out of a portal wearing nothing but his speedo. He panted for a while and said he was finally free before running off without Parousia45 and Carla noticing*

You really care about May.

Carla: *Sniff* Yeah, I want her to feel love for someone because it is a greatest joy anyone can have. It is a good thing I've made a friend with Ri2's character, BlackWarGreymon!

Wait...So that means my dreams seeing you chasing after BlackWarGreymon is real?

Carla: I've been searching him for days since I want him and Ri2 to talk together in Author's Notes since they look like cool brothers. Plus, I've wanted him to read my stories since he is a cool guy with his adventure to save Ri2.

...Carla, do you really have to?

Carla: Of course and besides, you talk with Alfred, Zidane, Minako, Delta, Lindow, Isaac, Sakuya, Gabriel (Dukemon), and Snap Shot during Author's Notes. I want to see him and Ri2's dynamic again since it was cute! *Opens a portal and a BlackWarGreymon dummy fell* Huh?

...Looks like your bubbly personality and enthusiasm scared him that he escaped. *Checks the dummy's armor and sees that it is made of Chrome Digizoid I think he is now wearing only his speedo now because the dummy is wearing his armor but not his speedo. Carla?

Carla: *Crying a waterfall of tears and depressed* What have I done wrong?

...I wonder how ghost chandeliers have tears. Carla is really this sensitive...

Miror B, damn I think I'm screaming in the inside because of the sheer horribleness of the song he is singing. I thought Earwyn's and Alex's (Alphamon) puns were one of the horrors of the dimension. Though that battle was silly and showed the Pokerockers' awesomeness.

Dakim was disturbing. I got a hard time reading it because of too much muscles. Though I find this the least memorable among the admins.

Venus seems to be the only one among the villains beside Gonzap being the threatening one in a serious way. The fight is serious and intense that it is entertaining with a unlikable villain that makes her a good one. It also gave Ash's friends a hard time and it required their skills and wit to defeat their opponents (Though the Gardevoir fight was comedic, not to mention while reading this, Grace was smiling since the seductive Gardevoir with bigger breasts than her was defeated). Venus was the only admin to die onscreen and she became an admin barbecue.

Leiru: Great, a lot of authors like to kill characters by turning them into barbecues.

Fein just broke the fourth wall. Wow, just only getting a cameo and being put out like that made him do it. I wonder if the characters who talk in my comments will screw me if I made them flat...Eh? *Recognizes that there are some young men and women, an armored dragon man, an Aggron, a large living diving suit, and a blue crocagator sitting around a white round table* Guys?

Alfred: Glad you can join us P45.

Sakuya: *Pushes a tray cart full of pastries, teas, and coffees* Thank you for waiting, everythings prepared. *Serves everyone including Parousia45*

...Are there any human bits in here?

Sakuya: *Smiles* No, why would I serve you that?

Yeah, you're right. 'But isn't she the maid of a vampire? She might serve her mistress cakes and tea with human bits in it.'

Sakuya: I made it with the blend you love. Full of coffee, but no cream and sugar.

Thanks, you do know my preference.

Sylvia: *Sad and gloomy* The author himself love coffee. I lost.

Duftmon: Hahaha! I won!

Sylvia: I won't lose next time Garfield!

The battle of Wes and Gonzap was the best of this chapter. Showing the beauty and might of that Ho-oh who is Latias' father. The ending is pretty heartwarming that shows the mutual respect between old enemies and how Gonzap still views him as his son despite his betrayal. Though the banter of Wes and Rui was hilarious that made the badass trainer embarrassed.

Latias' father finally showed himself and like Latias, I didn't expect him to be like that as he was described as by her mother. He is still flawed and he isn't a good father because of abandoning his children though he can be viewed as a tragic character.

All in all, a great episodic chapter with a bit of nostalgia at the ending of the chapter. Pretty much calmed my mind down after the previous chapter, though I've read the first part of the next chapter and back to Nightmare Fuel land.

Dear, that is too dark and the area is a combination of Dante's Inferno and the city of Rapture. I knew Mewgle is bad news and damn he fills me with too much nightmare fuel. The designs of the monsters are very disturbing that makes Aragami put to shame. Not to mention that Mewgle himself is more terrifying than his first appearance since imagining the way he made Team Rocket witness horrifying deaths but his laugh is enough to scare even the abominations he created.

Wow, I never knew there would be a job called the Hobbit and they're the worse job than a Spoony Bard. He was able to escape death but in return was to be subjected to a life worse than death to fuel the evil from his fear. I think I'll see Team Rocket, except James, as abominations and dead.

Speaking of Team Rocket, Their deaths are gruesome and cruel even for people like them. Some of them are compared to the Fatalities of Mortal Kombat with the brutality and dying as they felt every moment of it. Though I find the deaths of Cassidy, Annie, and Oakley the most gruesome among them. While the others are violent, those deaths are very long and detailed that they're overkill.

Leiru: *Was reading a book when he heard Parousia45 talking* Overkill...Hmm, *Looks up and made an imagination bubble that details his death* He loves to kill me in the best way possible...By the people I love.

Damn, not only Mewgle but Giovanni is at their side now...Well, not really Giovanni since he is long gone and is just a monster taking his identity.