Hi, someone on Asian fanfics has copied this story and replaced the characters..just so you know story/view/207071/1/fallen-angst-eunhae-romance-yaoi-hurt

wow. good story. i liked it. u played the strings of emotion very well, overall a very entertaining read. so thank you again. an my upcoming holiday is halloween lol. btw i loved the skits. very comical

awesome can't wait for the next chapter

Plushies! XD hehe This was an AWESOME fic! I loved it! hehehe

I've read it two years ago and left FFnet for a long time...

And you know, it's still fun to read and I'm really glad I found it (it took me ages because you've changed your pen-name!)

It was a good memory :)

You made a perfect story. At some times at was sad, that i wanted to cry. And there were parts i nearly died laughing. It was fun to read and i really enjoyed myself. Thanks for the great story.

Hi, I really liked your story, it was really funny in lots of places, though I should say I didn't find chapter 19 or the beginning of chapter 20 funny, I found it sad. It made me wanna cry, and I think a tear or two did fall.

I hope to read a sequel to this story.

Pink-Angel-1992

wow, that was awesome story, I wish you wrote a sequel.

Burst into tears~!

Even if there's a happy ending you some how brought tears to my eyes! The entire Fanfiction had me restless. The small humor and violence was great, you must be a god to combine such a pair.

Steve and Voltaire partners….oh dear god…Steve was bad enough. Did I mention you’re kinda graphic? I can’t possible picture the horrid things they can do two both couples! Kai/Rei and Bryan/Tala

I hope you have a Sequel even if you had started one, I just hope there is one .;

Awsome update soon.

I red this entire story! It was so sad how Rai was beaten and then taken away from his Kai/Koi/Pheonix and also of how Kai was nearly dead thank Kami and you that he is still alive! I think KaixRai and BryanxTala couples are so Cute/Kawaii! It's 12:30 in the afternoon and I just got done reading a butch of yaoi fics after being up 24 hours I'm going to bed! PLEASE DO A SEUQEL -on hands and knees begging- animelover257 Ja-Ne -

That. Was. Beautiful!

Sure, agree with Bryan, SEQUEL! Luv it. I had lost the name of your excelent story so i had ot read it all again to realize that this was the "fallen" i was looking for. Continue writing.

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OMG dude you r soo godam funny! ho geez I love you you r in all 4 of my favoruite and alert lists!