Best Naraku/Kagome fic any has ever written just so well written.

I love this. It's tragic, yet, in a sort of twisted way, happy. Chapter 13 in particular was heartbreaking, with Kagome seeing a trapped moth and freeing it, since she herself is trapped. So beautiful.

Last two lines - very powerful. Whole concept of this fic is good.

This is the first Kagome/ Naraku story I'm reading I like so far :)

Read All the Chapter they were Awsome.

I really wish you'll continue this :) it's beautiful. It's in their characters and very well-written. And now we see that not everything is black and white. There's always that shade of grey.

Please, please, please write more!

This is a beautiful story. It feels like watching ink curl and spread in water, gentle yet ominous.. like a soft draft of breeze in winter. Would have loved to see it continue. Keep up the great work!

- Amrita

Your writing style is just...beautiful. It reminds me of a spider's web, something scary yet pretty. I'm at a loss for words. Keep writing! You should write more on this one, definitely :)

So. Much. Freaking. Talent. O.O

awwwwww its over, dang it

p-p-play with her, sigh, that dosn't sound...ermmmm, good

what a jerk

I'm really loving this story! I've read quite a few NarKag stories lately, but this is the best I've read. There's just enough hints of romance between the two but you keep Naraku so in character that it becomes believable. It's amazing how you pull that off!

I hope you'll be able to update soon. I know what it's like to be occupied with work/school, etc. (I haven't updated any of my stories in months...tsk tsk) So as my mom would always tell me, take your time but hurry up! XD

great story please update again

i love it cant wait for more!