Ah, another scene in Trigun I have yet to watch. ; I can't even place who the character was that Nick shot. I cracked up at the part where Nick begged for a room and the way that you described Vash's eyes and the way they could make even the strongest of men cave. It's so true, Vash really does get eyes like that. You really played on their dynamic personalites and how they are complete opposites. I loved the way that you showed how Nick resents, and even if he doesn't want to admit it, admires Vash for the way that he lives his life. I also liked the way that you showed how Vash isn't as clueless as he lets everyone believe.

Very good

I had considered what might be going though Nick's head during the confrontation with RaiDei. I also wonder what Vash was thinking - the things that he didn't say -

but I'm not writer - you did a great job filling in the blanks.