Impressive, most impressive

Wow! These poems are amazing! You need to write more of them! They hit me right to the core!

Whaaaaat?

Absolutely awesome! Love them. Thanks for sharing!

Very long, but cool.

aweosme!

Thank You For Making This Poem It Is Nice And Sweet And Bless You For Righting This Jedi Knight and "May The Force Be With You".

LOL NICE

Wow. Wow indeed. What a great poem or three.

i totaly agree,now i understand myself better there always two sides and a start to the story love can kill its tru

thanx
sonofvader

I love Star Wars and Star Trek so much! I've grown up with them. My English class was asked to write a collection of poems by making some and finding some, I wanted to make some poems about those two subjects and I found yours. They are so awesome! Thanks for helping me still get an A!

These poems are fabulous! I love them! You are an amazingly talented writer! The second was my favorite, although they were all wonderful. I really liked the line about there being beauty in the beast. Thank you for posting these!

"Can no one else see there is beauty in the beast?"

"Could it be you wear your black to mourn?"

Oh, wow. You just captured how I feel about Vader in totality in those last 2 poems, with the exception that I never thought before about how he could be wearing black to mourn what he'd become. Very cool insight on your part.

Beautiful poems.

I can't believe you had to read that 2nd one in front of class! Reminds me of having to read a sci-fi story I wrote in 6th grade in front of the class. Yikes. I hid behind the pages I was reading the entire time. :P

*Smiles* Cool poetry. Read BRANDED, the one I wrote. It's a very similar PoV.

Very good