Interesting.

the ending could be
10 YEARS LATER
Inuyasha comes back to the village to destroyed every1, instead of just killing them he severly injures them and tie them and have them die slowly, by inflicting a deep wound, this was they all wish they were finished off easily.

You have a real gift, I wish you'd return to fanfiction.

Sin cere,

- DoP - ~

This story was very well written and it also seems very accurate while not seeming overly dramatic. So good job wuith this, your really good at writing in other people's perspectives.

so beautiful and sad you should make another chapter

aww, this made me tear up a little bit!

thats so sad, and so genius! great job.

Oh... I like it! How it pretty much helps explain why Inuyasha's so distrustful. And you have the thing in there, too, about how he had to make a place for himself, like he told Kagome that one time. It's nice to see a story for once that's in tune with the series it's a fanfic of, and that doesn't have anyone out of character. (although I guess there's only one real character in this story).

But, yeah, Inuyasha sure had a crappy childhood, huh?

That sounds like a show I just watched were some guy said "Yuri, I'll be back...with wepons

Wow. I loved it. GO INU! Revenge is sweet.

Cool oneshot. I like the dakness it stirs up in the pit of the soul. Very cool.

that was so sad omg. i feel like im gonna cry.

Hey read your story. I loved it and i think its because i'm very sensitive that i almost started to cry. I know call me lame if you want but i don't care

sad...yet it was a good story

*sniff* nicely written! poor little inu.