You not coming back to this story, are you?

I'd love for you to continue this, it's an incredibly good story, and is really well written :)

Please update this story, don't leave the readers hanging! :)

MrsDalek

great stories I have read a couple that you are rewriting please keep informed on all. Love to see what you do with them. also by now I think Daniel would be more for himself then total nice guy and say go ahead a marry the other guy. That is so BS even the bitsih have let commoners in now

I really like it. Keep writing.

This is good! It captures Daniel really well. Keep up the good work!

This is really well written, Eruanne! If you could try to do a little more descriptions, that would be wonderful! Some of your scenes, like right after and around when the Tel’tak was destroyed, you went just a bit too quickly. This part should have been drawn out some more; the emotion and the shock should be a little more prominent. The way you did it, it sounds a little like your hurrying the scene, like you can’t wait till you’re done with it. Sorry if I insulted you to much, I really do think you did a great job! I can’t wait for the next chapter!

I took a while but it was good.

Fabulosa, my beta!

Your stories are always interesting and unique!

Keep up the great work

Jenn

I read your bio and we have some things in common. I'm a homeschooling mom and we share a lot of the same movies,T.V. and music. I love your writing. More soon, Please! new creation

Was that a threat?

I really like this story!

Great update and lots of love and support from Ohio!

Okay; I'll reveiw already!

Very good. Nice plot thickening, so far, and I'll be interested to see how this ties in with the threat from whatchamacallit. I am a little disapointed the "Ancients", primarilly because I think of something vast and beyond understanding when I hear that word, and in your story (maybe also in the tv series) the people who go by it as a name do not quite live up to those expectations.

Also, I am looking forward to furthur developements in Galqi. Will he turn out to be some incredibly good person, fully worthy of Kate's love and Daniel's respect; or will he be revealed as a multi-faceted, tragic villian? The scope is endless! ALF

This story is getting good, can't wait to read what happens next !

I always feel appreciated and special when I'm mentioned as a beta. Thanks!

very nice cliffhanger - dont keep us waiting for the chapter please!