Reviews for never forget me |
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Clyoko fan chapter 9 . 7/24/2007 Hey, it's been over a year again. You're leaving this story un finished, you have to update. This fanfiction is really good, I really like, I pretty much have the whole thing memorized. I tired of checking to see if it's been updated yet and reading the same thing over and over again. I'm not trying to be mean but it's been over a year, I've seen many fanfictions that I like that people just gave up on. I don't want this to be one too. I hope you update soon. Clyoko fan |
JoJo chapter 9 . 8/10/2006 lol, its ok, i kno how sisters are. UGH! so annoying but anyway i hope u'll either redo it or add another chpt to it either way i want more. |
OddUlrichYumi12345 chapter 9 . 8/8/2006 i like the story but want to kwon what happens in the an inpacient person but i wasn't like this before ever since my brothe r turned 2 i become this way i trie to be paceint but it doesn't work. Oh an did i tell you i like the story |
xiNHiSDREAMSx3 chapter 9 . 7/25/2006 Umm just to tell u tho its late in the story Ulrich isnt spelled Ulrick spell it Ulrich... |
Alaynna chapter 9 . 7/15/2006 aw man! that sucks, but please update soon! ~*((JADE))*~ |
divinedragon7 chapter 9 . 7/15/2006 ok, thats funny |
LoveAlwaysPrevails chapter 9 . 7/15/2006 Are u continuing the next chapter? |
Tourmaline91 chapter 9 . 7/15/2006 Well tragic endings are better anyway, and they're more real. However I can't help to wonder what EXACTLY is going on in your life for you to be writing such a story. Intersting...:o DON'T LET ANYONE HURT YOU! |
kiyoiyuki chapter 9 . 7/15/2006 I'm sorry to hear that you've got some tough things going on in your life right now, but that's no reason to end a good story with such an abrupt and illogical ending. there's all this good buildup with your first eight chapters, then you end it with a rather pathetic "and she died" and then say "I'm sorry but I feel crappy so I'll just make the easiest conclusion" without an afterwards of the effects on the group. I personally think your writing was slightly less than standard, but at least followed a good plot up until the last chapter. good job on the first eight, and if you feel better, repost the last chapter. it was rather a waste of my time to try to check on your story for updates for ten months if you end it like that. that's why charles dickens was told to write a different ending for great expectations way back in the day... |
Shakespeare's2Juliet chapter 9 . 7/14/2006 OMG, the ending was so sad! It was a good story anyway :) I was not expecting that though. |
LoveSickZombie chapter 9 . 7/14/2006 awe. *sobs* it was a good story. sad but good. |
Alaynna chapter 8 . 6/24/2006 omg. hurry up and update! Btw, I'm sorry, but it's bugging me so badly...Ulrich's name is spelled with a "h" and not a "k"! But overall, good job. ~*((JADE))*~ |
Tsuiraku Nami chapter 8 . 6/24/2006 wow...that's really sad. I'll have to read the last chapter to see what happens there. |
Tourmaline91 chapter 8 . 6/23/2006 Oh crap that's messed up, however awesome...finally someone who isn't afraid of a sad endin'! Update real soon. |
LoveSickZombie chapter 8 . 6/23/2006 omg. i luv this story now. i hadnt read it b4. now i did. im happy i did. poor Yumi. |