How fun.

Good use of grammar.

No offense, but I don't see why you simply didn't add this on to the rest of "Family Affairs". Anyway...

I feel you really did a good job on this one, especially with all the insight into the characters' minds. (BTW, will Graydon Creed's "heritage" come to light soon? That would definitely deal a serious blow to the FOH. Then again, I think all of us would like to see that. *Shrug.*)

That’s kinda bittersweet.

Oh boy this is gonna be interesting! Great chapter!

And yes I have been frozen out by having several old fics falling into the evil Script catagory (Not unlike 100 other authors on here have done or worse!) But at least I have Calistolexx and a few other sites I'm posting them on so it's not a lost cause! Keep writing!

Well, it deffinitly filled in a few holes, and tied them up nicely. I'm back to my Three day work week, so I can finally catch up with all those chapters that you posted. Damn posting maniac! Don't expect a chapter from me in a while. I got suspended again for that Inside the Actor's studio story again. I guess they just don't like the story, even with the revissions. :Pouts:

ME: Woot, woot!

Van: ...Huh?

ME: Ah! It's Nils!

*Nils walks up.*

Nils: Hi.

ME: 'Ello Nils. How's it goin'?

Nils: Good. And you?

ME: Great! Thanks for coming on the show!

Nils: It's good to be here D-m-n-w-t.

Van: What the hell? I'm so confused...

ME: So Nils, tell me: When did you discover the portal in your stomach?

Nils: When it started sucking things up.

ME: ? Like what?

Nils: My skateboard, the neighbors' dog, your computer-

ME: What!

Nils: I'm not done! I've sucked up a fish, a gallon of gasoline, your Gamecube-

ME: Ach! Not my Gamecube! That's my one true love!

Nils: ...?

ME: Die you bastard! *Attacks Nils.*

that was a good fill in to family affairs, bacause you didn't really continue on this thing in 'adjusments'.

I LIKE IT. IT DUS FIL IN A FEW BLANKS. IF YOU ARE WUNDERING WHY I AM RITING LIKE THIS IT IS BEECUS I CANT GET THE CAPSLOK OFF.

Cute. I especially loved the flashback with Kurt and Amanda.

Mystique does hava a heart afterall. Aw.

R-Man

I'd like to say THANK YOU. A HUGE THANK YOU. So many people make Mystique to be a very evil lady and although she has her faults she just wants to be a good person with a family. So thanks for going against what many authors say and making this lil fic.

This was a wonderful chapter, It explains what has been happening with Mystque. Will this happy family be ruined in the future?

Peace out

When I saw this I thought "Hey...I didn't write this!" so sad! Poor Raven...

April: What was that about me dieing? Oh, wait...wrong April...

Romy: What are you talking about?

April: none of your beeswax.

Eric: I hate bees. Hey! I've got another presant idea

April: What now?

Eric: a snake!

April: Thats not funny

Romy: snakes are cool. let's get him a snake!

April: No, really...stop!

Romy&Eric: *off to Count D's Exotic Pets*

April: not...good