Oh, this is nice too. A little rougher in places maybe than the first one (There are some spots where you lay things out with narrative that you've already dramatized fairly effectively.), but still very, very good! I like your take on Havok and his underlying motivation for his fascination with earthquakes. Your characters are all very well developed and your dialogue is fairly sharp. This makes me disappointed that you've never shown us your interpretation of the Summers brothers' reunion. I think it would be very interesting to read.

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I like how you changed canon here so that in your universe Bobby was a friend to Alex and Lorna rather than a pain. That's one aspect of my favorite X-Man that I've never been fond of, so I'm glad you didn't make it part of your own continuity.