that was so cute!

i loved it!

I love your stories. they're always hot!

aw... i need to hug something now (goes to find kitty):P

Sarah: O.O wow... AWESOME!1 c2, here comes this ficcy!

that was a sweet sentiment. Well written of course, the only problem i had was that the paragraphs got too long at some points. I dont know if its just me or WHAT but i really dont like to read thick bushes of paragraphs. '

Um, the characters seemed pretty true to their "voices" no oocness as far as i could tell.

While i was reading this, my mind kep switching scenery on me. At the beginning you mentioned fog and then later on there was a tree. I dont noe WHERE they were supposed to be but i initially imagined a gloomy setting and in the middle it switched to happy go lucky. If i had ANYTHING to critique on in this story it would be the lack of scenic description.

I wouldnt go back and change it tho, the story(or whatever you wanna call it) flow fine without it and id say TRYING to put some scenery in their would just complicate things so overall, i really liked it. (im a big KakaSaku fan :p)

sweetness..

SHORT STORY, BUT IS WAS A GOOD STORY

aw twas so sweet .

we...(twirly, twirly) more! try! please!

i love you KAKASHI!

Wow, I want an ecounter like this! Good fic :-D

this is ok... i never really liked a kaka/saku thingy. i'm more of a yaoi person...hmm...i still think that this is good though so i'm gonna say that you should do more and do a flashback thingy so the readers can see why/how/where thingy about kakashi disapearing.

keep it up!

wow. i dont usually read saku/kaka fics because the age difference is overwhelming! and plus i love sasu/naru fics more. but this is so good. im giving saku/kaka a try cuz of your fic. its sweet. and the poem in the beginning was very appropiate. and it sound nice. this is a very good one shot. )