Eh, first chapter and I can't help but already dislike the OC. A little too... bratty for me, never really did have much interest with stories that follow childish protagonists. While the OC probably sheds the.. whatever her issue is I think my first impression of her killed my interest. Anyways, despite my differing preferences for stories or characters I would like to thank you for contributing and sharing the story.

cool story

Well, this wasn't quite what I was expecting. So we're in R: 1 for a change. I'm not the greatest expert in this area, but I can go along with this. Not that I dislike R: 1, it's just a little... ehh, no awesome Avatar summoning.. .

For one thing, the very first person that talks to Iam, was that... Sanjuro? D

Now, to my more important topic: Data Draining. I'll agree with you, it's a bit corny. In fact, I found myself thinking, "Oh god, I hope that this doesn't turn out to be like the Power Rangers' colors." Hell, I even called Chikoro's Data Drain color too. Unless there's Orange, Green, and Purple, I'll feel a bit disappointed. (Primary color scheme vs Secondary color scheme) But then that'd be pretty Power Rangers wouldn't it... sorry, disregard that. xD

Um... well, so far, that's all I can really say. Oh, unless I want to bash Ayumi... god, I don't like her type. Randomly comes out of nowhere just to take the P.L.I. of another person that they don't even know just to screw with them. Hmm... Iam/Mai... well, I caught that on the first strike. I'm going to be honest, it's a tad bit clever mixed with a lot of bad kind of pun.

Overall, it'll take some used to get back into R: 1, especially when my mind has been set in R: 2 for my own FF, but I'll nevertheless hopefully enjoy this.

FLR~

The story so far has been completely awesome! I've been reading it since I got up this morning and it would in fact be AWESOME as and anime and manga.

I like what you are doing with this story so far. you do not have to worry about me asking constantly to update since I am very patient.

Nice story! You have plenty of chapters up. Keep writing!

-Silvermoon

Argh!

2008 already!

and no updates!

the most reviewed .hack fanfic of !

I'm going to die!

I'll become an EMO!

Wh hope you are alright...

you must have a quite good reason to stop writing your amazing stories...

*sniff*

still waitin

Hey Sammy, I wasn't sure if you got my last email, so I'll paste it here:

"Hey, if you don't remember me, this is Kite1763 from I was just emailing you because... well... I haven't heard anything from you for a while. You haven't updated your stories, you're never online... I just wanted to drop you a line and say hi 'cause I sorta miss hearing from you.

I know that sounds tacky but anyway...

So yeah, just making sure everything's OK. I mean, not only do I love your stories and miss getting your alerts in my inbox, but like... it's just so weird not hearing anything from you.

So if you could email me back just to let me know you're still around, that'd be great. Though I could understand if you wouldn't want to.

I hope everything's OK. I'm sorry if I'm too intrusive, but anyway, just drop me a line if you have the time, OK? I just want to know you're still around."

So yeah, if you want to contact me that'd be great.

I love this story...

Hey, when are you goin' to send in another chapter?

It's been like forever!

Still waitin'...

But, thank you for making such a great story though.

This is pretty much my favorite on FanFiction :)

Hey Sammy! I saw the cameo message and am submitting my prof!

Name: Koboyashi-Suchiro

Age (Or Looks Like): Middle aged, 30-40.

Color: Blue

Design: He has blue hair flattened against his head, bangs falling over his eyes. He wears a piece of blue armor for his chest plate, and has dark saphire shoulder guards. He has a long black flowing cape that has a blue fringe around it, and dark brown leather pants.

Personality: Calm, collected, seems kind of anti social, but in reality just doesn't like to talk.

Girl, you had better get busy on this. Also...DO YOU REALIZE HOW LATE I'M UP, READING YOUE AWESOME STORY! I WAS SUPPOSED TO BE IN BED 5 GOURS AGO! Ah, well. That's my fault, right? Have fun writing the rest of the story!

I think I just had a stroke...

Dude, I am freakin' out after reading this again. I'm...about to rip something, break something, ANYTHING to get this trip off of my mind. Story rocks, though.