A great story, Guy! You put the 'canonical" post-Season 7 stories, from Dark Horse Comics, to shame.*

It's a pity so many of your older w.i.p.'s haven't been completed, yet.

*As far as I'm permanently concerned, those are just glorified corporate fanfiction till JW starts putting them on the silver screen or the TV screen.

So, yeah, I posted my review after going through start to finish, and now going over them again... because some of these chps just seem to cut off, like now at the end of 10. There are many spots throughout all 18 where there could have been better editing, but overall, Does read much better than alot of others' stories, regardless of length or scope. This IS a Good story with solid Vision. Thanks again.

Thank you for this wonderfully thought-out story! It was very entertaining, thought you had a great deal of the characterization nailed, and the level of 'logic' built in to it spot ON! Gods, and you did this 16 years ago? I just killed this in one afternoon/evening. Thank you, again.

I like how the detectives are slowly growing more and more suspicious of the scoobies. The way Munch and Fin tried explaining their "bad feeling" about Buffy and Dawn to Cragen was very awkward and funny. Buffy comforting Dawn was cute and in character. Glad to hear from Giles too. Looking forward to reading more.

Pretty interesting chapter. Buffy and Dawn handled the detectives and snooped around quite well. I wonder how will they proceed. No way they will just let the local police investigate the murder of their employee (and the friend, probably). I like how even Munch and Fin feel uncomfortable around them, but they can't figure out why, exactly. Can't wait to find out what will Munch's background check on the Summers sisters reveal. Looking forward to reading more.

Very interesting beginning. I wonder what the symbol carved into the victim's abdomen means, and who were the first two victims. I liked how you described Fin and Munch sensing that there is something off about Buffy and Dawn. I'm interested to learn how will Buffy and Dawn handle police attention, and what will they do about the murder of their employee. You have a good understanding of both shows, and the characters. Looking forward to reading more.

Loved it! I'm a big fan of both shows and it's hard to find believable crossovers but you made it work. I'm impressed that it really just seemed like I was watching an SVU episode with some Buffy thrown in for spice. Anyways, hope you kept writing! Guess I'll go explore...

Can you write new chapters 683

SUPERB.

Very well written story. It deserves a sequel. You really nailed the characters.I wish you had had a scene at the end when Cummings was in the interrogation room,refusing to talk. And then have Dawn ask to speak with she would tell him he fucked up the ritual-so he spills everything cuz he is if Cummings had been torn apart in his cell by a very angry demon or whatever it was he was made the sacrifices to. Really good job writing ,very enjoyable

Very good

Just a freakin great crossover. The connections are plausible and neither side is made to look too incompetent or silly.

This story is SO MUCH MORE FUN AND COMPELLING than anything Marvel Comics had done in the last decade.

I ESPECIALLY liked THIS line:

"...every day you wake up and have a chance to make the world a better place
is a day you've won the war."

THANK YOU.

Thank you, I enjoyed this.

Where is Willow?