Reviews for Transience |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't look at your bio..yet.. I thought it was going to be an actual story..but honestly..unsure what to think of this. Tsion doesn't seem like he would do that with her.. I was shocked to learn (just now as I'm now reading the LB book series..) that Leah has a thing for Tsion according to the book! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! Wish it were a bit longer... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, nice :) Tell me more! It really only gives that basics... I advise going back thru and adding detail... maybe a sequel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Hattie. The Fallen Woman archetype writ large. She never even has a chance, does she? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah I love the idea of these two together. I couldn't help but giggle to myself whenever Tsion and Hattie talked. I wish this fic was longer. It was only five lines. A huge disappointment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :0 What is it with you LB writers and scandal? The bad thing is...I kinda like it! You've got me curious...tell me mo' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally someone who feels the same way as I do about these two! :-[ |
![]() ![]() ![]() o...angst... |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT THE HELL? |
![]() ![]() WTF? That's not a story. It's a few lines that make no sense. HALF of it was an Author's Note! It's actually worse than Left Behind the series. "Hattie." "Sh." This does not equal story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story's way too short. Go back and add some more detail; give more meat to it, as I like to say and what others say. |