Reviews for Transience
SunRise19 chapter 1 . 10/3/2016
I didn't look at your bio..yet..
I thought it was going to be an actual story..but honestly..unsure what to think of this. Tsion doesn't seem like he would do that with her..
I was shocked to learn (just now as I'm now reading the LB book series..) that Leah has a thing for Tsion according to the book!
autumnrose2010 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
This is really good! Wish it were a bit longer...
dorkydearest chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
Haha, nice :) Tell me more! It really only gives that basics... I advise going back thru and adding detail... maybe a sequel?
Evil Riggs chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Poor Hattie. The Fallen Woman archetype writ large. She never even has a chance, does she?
yours216 chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
ah I love the idea of these two together. I couldn't help but giggle to myself whenever Tsion and Hattie talked. I wish this fic was longer. It was only five lines. A huge disappointment.
BabyHouse chapter 1 . 2/7/2006
:0

What is it with you LB writers and scandal?

The bad thing is...I kinda like it!

You've got me curious...tell me mo'
pococurantism chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
Finally someone who feels the same way as I do about these two! :-[
Sylvey chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
o...angst...
Inspector Brown chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
WHAT THE HELL?
cheney chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
WTF?

That's not a story. It's a few lines that make no sense. HALF of it was an Author's Note!

It's actually worse than Left Behind the series.

"Hattie."

"Sh."

This does not equal story.
Gaelfire chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
This story's way too short. Go back and add some more detail; give more meat to it, as I like to say and what others say.