This was such a sweet story. The poem described Beast Boy's feelings, Terra's actions, and the entire situation in the most perfect manner possible. The entire poem was incredibly descriptive and it did a perfect job of conveying the meaning of the story. You did an awesome job on this story and I really hope that you'll write more stories featuring Beast Boy and Terra. Great work! -TheGoldenYoshichu

I'm not usually one to read poems but this one I really like. Regret can be a very powerful stimulant to one's thoughts so I would think that Beast Boy would be very capable of such thoughts given the situation.

Wow...This was excellent (even though I don't really care for BB and Terra couples...)!

Hoorah!

This is great!

Exceptional! Truly exceptional!

...Is this a BBxTerra? Uh...? Or is it a sort of...BB's way of saying, "Hey, Terra, I like Raven better" but also "...But I still love you Terra"?

I dont know why I waited so long to read some of your other stuff, guess that was my mistake! This was beautifully written and I'm glad you posted this.

Hope all is well!

Adorian

so beautiful made me cry

Awes! Its so Heart-Filled! I nearly cried as I read the words. Its such a depressingly beautiful piece.

I liked it a lot. I'm more of a BBRae than a BBTerra, but I really like it. My favorite line was

Sticks and stones may break bones

but words can pierce the heart

the damage is so much more

when the seams are ripping apart

PLease Keep Writing.

I really liked your nice poem about Terra.

Wow, that was so beautiful! I read it all outloud, and I almost cried! Good job.

NICE!

That...Is... The... Single...Most...Beautiful...Poem... I... Have.. Ever... Heard!

The peom's cool. Write more.

-Azanthis

p.s. Don't doubt your abilities