this is awesome !

O.O ... okay... Lol robin's name was dick, DICK I couldn't stop laughing. Plus he was a dick! Purr-fict, but I don't know what to say about the ending, I mean sure some people like to mess with the laws of physics but... I'm just so confused. :3

Wow. An actual happily ever after ending for like once. Amazing story! I love it.

:)(: Excellent story. I like how the romance developed between Starfire and Raven. I like the high school element in the story. The date to the fair was cute and I like how Raven won Starfire the toy animal. They had the best coming out, just a big ol' smooch. I love it. Raven going all kicka**, bad a** on father was awesome. Sequel?

good story but one thing I don't understand is how could raven get starfire pregnant? their both female hmm maybe her demon side makes it possible for her to impregnate other women.

Excellent, I love Shoujo Ai. The emotions and the romance in Shoujo Ai are so beautiful and heartfelt. And add in the fact that it is a homosexual relationship between two girls makes it even more special a romance in my opinion because they are risking so much to be in love.
Note: there is a great Shoujo Ai romance manga you might like, it's called 'Girl Friends' by Milk Morinaga.

Did you really have to end the whole story there, I was getting to the best part. But I still love it.

Another amazing story. I do have one thing to say, and I'm not trying to but, back when Jinx and 'Rachel' first meet. Jinx calls her Raven.

(The spot is "Kory... Raven's really cool!" Jinx said.)

I love this story so much. I'm a budding author, and I hope that I'll be able to draw readers in like you do.

Aww! Thiz 1 waz cute. I luved it! The endin iz cute an funny 2. lol.

F**king LOVED it! ur like a god os the starfire raven couple!

aww cute ending X3 i really like how you use the characters in different settings it makes the stories more interesting 3

wtf? Raven does not have a penis if i remember correctly. Please explain how that works.

huh. cute but corney it need a bit more detail but its otherwise okay.

~dreamer

I like it a lot and I take it at the end raven learned to control her form. just a side note you keepted saying raven when you ment rachal. when star was talking since she would not have known that Raven was raven at that time.