Reviews for Wanda's Thoughts
X Men Evolution fan chapter 8 . 7/13/2005
This is a fab story, although you do need to improve your spelling and grammar. Are you going to write a sequel? I love the Wanda/Simon pairing. Please do NOT break them up, and do not copy the Avengers comics and put her with Vision. I hate that pairing. It's just wrong! Hurry up and post Back to School. I also wish you'd get a move on with the fic about Wanda meeting Lorna's mom.
Silver Warrior chapter 8 . 1/25/2005
I love getting into a character’s mind. This is nicely done, especially when the character you’re getting into the mind of is so troubled.
Dark Gotham chapter 8 . 1/1/2005
Another great series by you and once again. I don't care for diary format stories because that's so over done, with most Fan Fiction series. However, this one is all so wonderful. I love how this is coming.
slickboy444 chapter 8 . 12/26/2004
Sorry for the lateness of this review! But here I am! I liked this one a lot, espically at the mention of the infamous prank Kurt pulled on Rogue! That was just too priceless! You did a really good job of showing Wanda going through bouts of happiness, sadness, humor, and depression. It really shows how complex her character is. You've done a great job of showing her in a new light and I applaud you for that! Keep up the great work man! You rock! Peace out!
Ruby631 chapter 8 . 12/23/2004
I thought you dropped this! That was a great prank, not that I play pranks on my friends alot...whatever.

Romy: You have friends?

Shuddup. Dude, Christmas is TOMARROW! Holy crap I haven't done hardly enough shopping! How can I leave the house to GO shopping when I don't have a care or some one to drive me to the damn mall?

Eric: Or a license for that matter

April: Or money. Just tell everyone you couldn't shop because of exams.

Romy: Ok, who are you and what have you done with goody two-shoes April?

April: Hardy har har.
Erich chapter 8 . 12/23/2004
Under the circumstances, Wanda should definitely go for a GED. I'd say Sarah should wait until she has her temper under control. As for the other students, Xavier should wait and see what the new principal is going to be like. If the new principal is like Kelly, I'd say forget it if they're not going to get a fair chance from the teachers.

Okay. I know how Jean, Scott, Kitty, Piotr, Kurt, and Tabby reacted to what happened to Rogue and Vince. But what about the others? Of course Blink figured it out first. I believe Gale would have been happy for them. I think she and Vince share a special bond - something between friendship and brother/sister. I'm also certain Rogue and Vince wanted to have a word with Blink, and that Blink had to play hide-and-seek with those two.

As for what happened to the DR room, first off you should have mentioned Hank also helped repair the room back when Mayhem totaled the place. Second, I was going to mention where was Scott, since he helped Logan back then, but then I realized Scott, Jean, Rogue, Vince, Kitty, and Piotr are probably going to avoid Logan for a while.

The soundproofing will keep most of the others from picking up their activities, but I'm certain Xavier, Jean, and Gale might pick up some things. Especially Gale, since she's new.

I get the feeling that first Jean and/or Rogue, then Hank, are going to be getting a visit from the girls in the following order: Wanda, Amanda, Tabby, Jubilee, Rahne, and Paige. However, I get the feeling that with the exception of Wanda and perhaps Tabby, no one's going to be doing anything for a while because they all have parents. And that goes double, no triple for Kurt and Ray. I take it Ray has yet to meet Pam's parents, and you already mentioned Kurt being afraid of Mr. Sefton.

Speaking of that, I take it Wanda has a new respect for Kurt. I wonder how everyone else at the mansion, Pam, Amy, and Joseph reacted. Hell, I bet even the Brotherhood and Acolytes would have enjoyed that, and the prank Rogue and Vince pulled on Kurt. The only ones who would be in the dark would be Amanda's parents.

I have to agree with Wanda's estimation of Pietro.

I would have had Wanda threaten to hex them if she finds out they did get frisky on her bed, and add for emphasis "to hell with whatever punishment Xavier and Logan might put on her."

I take it then that Shadow's going to be coming back right before or during the expansion, and while that's going on, Wanda will be with Lorna. And I also take it you're going to do a one-shot of Wanda meeting Lorna's mother.
Red Witch chapter 8 . 12/23/2004
Meeting Lorna's mom huh? This ought to be interesting! Great chapter! I'd write more but I'm coming down from a cookie high. Maybe making icing with Sambuca and mixing it with a lot of sugar isn't that good an idea! He he...Happy Holidays!
The Uncanny R-Man chapter 8 . 12/23/2004
Nice to see you update, loved Wanda's ponit of view of the prank Kurt pulled on her, that was damn hilarious!

Can't wait to see what happens wheh she talks to Lorna.
Damn-my-name-was-taken chapter 7 . 10/30/2004
ME: Man... I just got an idea... but it sucks. I'll ask you about it later. It's for my fic. When I get to that point... then I'll ask you, ok?

Van: I'll teach Wanda how to swim! That'll be fun! I love swimming! Specially with girls around...

Jaeger: I think she'd prefer learn from someone a bit less perverted.

ME: Yeah. You should make Simon, like... I dunno. Surprise her by just being at the Institute when she comes home from school or something. Then she'd be all happy and shit. Yeah.

Van: What's Simon got that I haven't got?

Jaeger: Charm, looks, money, a good personality.

Van: You can stop there.

Jaeger: Ok. Lemme know if you change your mind. I've got more.

Van: I know you do.

ME: Guess what I'm gonna be for Halloween? A NICE PERSON!

Van: Whoa! No way! How on Earth are you gonna pull that off?

ME: ...I was thinking about maybe being nice to people.

Van: Holy matrimony!

Jaeger: Yeah! Holy matr- No! I will not speak Van!

Van: You mean Vanese. God, of you're gonna say it, say it right.

Jaeger: Sorry. I will not speak Vanese. Ever.

Van: Much better.

ME: Vanese? WTF? Crazy people.
xmenfan chapter 7 . 10/28/2004
Great chapter.

I loved it, when the future scenes of Wanda being with SHIELD was mentioned. It was great.

Also, isn't Wanda weirded out, by Xavier being a telepath and having the ability entering into her head? I noticed that in adjustments, Xavier sent out a telepathic message to her, and told her to meet him in his office. So, I was wondering if Wanda feels really strange that there are two telepaths living in the same house as her (one telepath being one of the most powerful mutants on the planet in Xavier, and another one who's telepathy is still developing, and has the potential to be the most powerful in Jean Grey)?

Wanda likes Xavier, and thinks very highly of him, so I think its cool that she trusts him, and realises that he would never invade her personal thoughts, or mistreat her. At the same time, I think it would be a normal human reaction, if she was a little wierded out by all of that. It would be the same thing, when Evan mentioned in a season one episode, that they can't keep anything from Xavier, implying that he, along with the rest of the students, naturally are a little weirded out by Xavier having the ability to enter into their minds, and are trying to keep secrets, like most teenagers do.

I don't think Wanda should hold that against either of them, since again, Wanda trusts the Professor and realises that he would never invade her privacy. But, I think it would be natural for her to feel a little weird by it, and her having to get used to living in the same house with two telepaths.

It would be interesting to see Wanda with her own room, in the mansion. I can't wait to see how she handles that.

Will she become a full time member of the X-Men team, soon? I hope so.

Nonetheless, great story. Keep up the good work!

P.S...I love the fact that Wanda is still playing the role of 'protective big sister.' I still have this mental picture of Scott warning his brother not to mistreat Wanda's sister. Since he knows about Wanda's temper, I can imagine that he's telling Alex not to do anything to tick Wanda off.
Ruby631 chapter 7 . 10/27/2004
I cant wait 'till Wanda meets Lorna's mom, and if Pietro ever finds out about Lorna,...well, it should be entertaining
fireinu chapter 7 . 10/27/2004
I like your storys. I em glad I ken rivue your storys agen. I wus at home and I coodnot for sum reeson.
TheLegendaryManHimself chapter 7 . 10/27/2004
u know at first wanda was ready to burn this journal now she actually enjoys writing in it, that show's she's getting over those anger issues. plus the who part about not being able to swim was great, and i also see u managed to get the rahne/joseph fluff that u had planned for that extra fluffy chapter in adjustment. although i can't help but wonder if u were maybe forshadowing wanda and the avengers b/c i mean we all know capt. america does exisit in the evo: universe. oh well keep up the good work
slickboy444 chapter 7 . 10/27/2004
Great job an yet another look in the inner workings of Wanda Maximoff! You really showed well the conflict she has with things like Pietro and her childhood, but I was most drawn in by her thoughts on Lorna. Now that she's the only family that she's on speaking terms with I guess she really wants to hang on to it! It shows really well! So is she actually going to meet Lorna's mother? That would definitely be interesting to read! Keep up the great work man! Slickboy out!
Red Witch chapter 7 . 10/27/2004
Wow another great chapter! Swimming lessons huh? Oh boy! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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