| Reviews for Weremon, BleuBerries, & Past Mysteries |
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  kitty-chan chapter 3 . 7/18/2012 update please! |
 Nezumi.Yandere chapter 3 . 2/27/2011 will you please finish the story |
| Kitty chapter 1 . 11/30/2009 Was very turned off right away when reading this. If you want to put in foot notes put them at the end of the story. Putting them in the middle looks really bad. Putting on caps lock LIKE THIS is kinda lazy, considering you can just describe how they are speaking instead. Using the words sweat dropping is just a really bad way of describing things. And lastly, don't write...sentences..like...this... it really doesn't add to the emotion. It actually looks like you're trying too hard. |
| Thivft chapter 3 . 10/17/2008 Nah, you need to update~! Chapter... So short! I like it, so please update! |
| toppyoushimonai7 chapter 3 . 8/6/2008 Just informing you that wolf is Ookami in Japanese. I am taking a japanese class and have sevral learning instruments that help with it. I can garuntee it is Ookami. I sugest you use several different sorces before you decide on an answer. Also, I found some minor spelling mistakes. Most of the time you would just forget a letter. I make these kinds of mistakes all the time and they're hard to break but if you really work on it you can become a great writter. I am not that good yet but I love reading good fanfics. I think your chapters need to be a little longer however. The last one seemed short to me... If you are annoyed with me at this point, I understand. Send me a message if you please. I have nothing better to do. Seriously. |
| amberkitti chapter 3 . 4/25/2008 cool fic you hafe to update soon please _ i loved it! |
| XsuicideXkittyX chapter 3 . 10/5/2007 oh this is cool hope you do another vhap |
| izuru chapter 3 . 5/1/2007 no! it was at the good part too! -anime cry- TT_TT |
| izuru chapter 2 . 5/1/2007 i really love your story so far! its awsome! keep it up! D |
| deaaaaaaaad chapter 3 . 7/10/2006 I know whats gonna happen to Kouji...l Hes gonna be.../ RAPED BY KOUICHIS OTHER HALF!C I read this fanfic cuz Kouji and Takuya look so KAWAII together!x3 |
| krissi-chan chapter 1 . 5/7/2006 wow. that is really sad that kouji's dad beats him. |
| krissi-chan chapter 3 . 4/1/2006 how dare you make him sick. and why the heck didn't we meet kouichi earlier? |
| Soaha chapter 3 . 3/13/2006 Cool. Update soon. |
| FyreFlyODoom chapter 1 . 8/24/2005 Really interesting. Would like to read more. |
| bloodykazekitsune chapter 3 . 7/27/2005 dude. u so totally need to update. i mean look how long it's been since u last updated. this will eventually piss ppl off u know? so how about u give us some love and UPDATE! jeez. ja ne! |
