Oh, man. . . That's just. . . Dang.

After all of the emotional pain that Raven caused him, Beast Boy is willingly letting his dark self hurt her, feeling that she deserves it. That. . . Dang.

Hey . . . um . . . what's with the lyrics? is it a poem, or something?

I haven’t read it yet, I will soon, but I just wanted to point out a mistaketerra died in season two, beast Boy became the beast in s3. And it wasn’t because of Terra.

This first chapter was really good just one question why didn’t you just say fuck off instead of bug off

One her of a story it was good kinda scared me in the ending but once I read it All I’m good now it was great

I wasn’t even born when you made this I was about to be In September

What? Batman is Bruce Wayne?

I admired the way you write your story with the way you manage to put the readers felt heartbroken every scene involving beastboy. I have love your story till the end but disappointingly enough the erotic writing were quite lacking in detail and i was not amused and due to your story rated M i expect more uncensored writing but thus you're writing have piqued my interest for then i will keep tab on you and i hoped you will hear from me a lot sooner . Till then

CHAIRMAN

Im so confused how we got here. The first few chapters were really consistent and great at portraying the characters emotions. Then somehow it started making less and less sense. Its not even the characters (since you did worn they would be ooc and I give you credit for that) but the story line itself get really lost. Like whh would they chain him up because hes so out of control but Raven will unchain him because he's flirting with her, or that he understands she cant be emotional but thinks her laughing while controlled by a dark wizard was the same, and honestly the way you played out the rape was OOC in every direction. Theres no way Raven would have just let that happen. Im sorry but theres zero evidence wven in this story to show that she would simply think she deserves this enough to go back for it? Not to mention the fact that Beast Boy said she deserved it all made no sense because it wasn't the beast that said that, it was Beast Boy in his own head. Im honestly not trying to make this into a flame I'm just very confused how we got to this point. I think you should work on being more consistent in your story lines and even if you're going to have a character be ooc you shpuld try to at least keep the other characters canon if the story isn't AU. Overall you have some real talent but I'm afraid I'm going to have to end the road here. I hope you read this as the advice it meant to be and see it as encouragement to just be a bit more careful with your storylines and character consistency.

you are treating rape like it's the victim's fault if you are going to write something this depraved and warped then you need to put a trigger warning!

This was absolutely wonderful

you spelled beast boy wrong and just so instead it said beats boy and juts

This story made me sad and happy at the same time.
It was good story although I didn't like the part when Raven got raped.. I hated that.

Still good story. :)

This actually made me very sad, because last year I thought I met my one, but she used me just to get a baby. I havent hid myself away, but been kept away. I havent got to see him at the doctors, feel him kick. Every day I prepare to fight so that I can at least be there in his life. Off my sappy note I did love this story, you really added a real edge to the characters. I really think you got beastboys mind down pat, the insults were crisp and real enough to actually hurt the titians had this happened. I however do not think beast boy would ever let himself hurt anyone. As someone that often hurls jokes as a way to make people better, I deep down put everyone before me. Although there is that one lil nagging part that wants to show force and anger. Maybe thats why I enjoyed this story so much I could really connect to the struggle. I hope you continue your writing and if you read this please email me some links of your other work.

ahhhhh reading this made me feel so happy and content at the same time so i really really loved it!i really loved this story will you do a prequel to it like with rob/star's son phoenix and bb/rea's daughter morgana? If so i would really like to read it and thank u for the interesting story;D