Omg I love this story

Did u have to kill Hagrid

Very good, I like it. I will read the next chapter.

I loved how you bacicly described Emma Watson.

Love it!

Well they were not very good even after after all that training.

In nearly every chapter you apologise over a delay, you all do it also for a short chapter. Why not write a longer chapter instead of rushing a small chapter and take more time to compleat your story. I sometimes think it’s the same excuse but different words.
Now this story is great and I await the next chapter keep up with the writing...

Merry Christmas it’s Merry Christmas NOT HAPPY CHRISTMAS what are you thinking...?

Well i dont know why but in real life Draco wouldn’t last very long, why hasn’t Harry given Draco
A good hiding why is Snape not discharged from his job as a Teacher clearly he hates the four. Mind you it does seem to be the same story but with different words.

I thought Harry was the only one with an invisibility cloak? How did Draco get one?

NO! Not Hagrid!

I bet you that the person who will pay the price for Harry will be Remus Lupon because he is Harry's last living link to his parents.

Well draco’s Still the knob of the class dont know where this story is going but its going without me.

I’m surprised that you didn’t have Harry seek out Malfoy and return the hiding he got from Draco. That’s something again you writers just dont do why ? It would be so so good.

Please dont make thick Ron as an heir it would just be wrong.