This is lovely! I could read 20 more chapters of this and still want more. And the sandwich theory was hilarious!
cheers xx

I really liked this, thank you very much!

Twenty credits says Qui-Gon is cheating at sabaac.

Aww, this is adorable.

Good to know she's learned her lesson!

Ewwwwww! Drugging and Force suggestions? This first padawan herself is closest to falling to the dark side! Wow... What the heck are you doing wrong Quigon. Poor Kenobi, you are about to be hit by a Darkened, boundary crossing, overbearing woman obsessed with vetting you against her idealized expectations. The worst type of person to deal with. Good grades ambitious? Please, don't make me laugh, no bias there! Stay strong Kenobi and hole that your master realizes what's going on and stops his crazy ex-padawan!

I read this a while back, and now I'm rereading it. I didn't realize how funny you are.

I dearly cherish the idea of people bribing Yoda with food and him being like "Yes, one of my line you are. Mmhhmm. Cookies." And then whacking people at random. I'm not sure why, but that just sounds downright adorable.

I love your story, keep up the good work!

Awww so cute! I love this fanfic, with Obi wan and Qui gon and Knight Morai. I like how you slowly developed Obi and Bellan's friendship. I also laughed at the 'sandwich as a weapon' thing. Lol! I need to think of ways a sandwich can attack. (You could chuck it at their face?) you should do another fanfic with the sandwich idea. I love this story, remarkable job!

Liked it! Cool to see a possible reaction with a former padawan of Qui-Gon's. Loved the bits about sandwiches.

This was such a fun read! I love the interactions between all the characters and you did a superb job with Morai and Obi-Wan's evolution through it. Great job over all!

I love this story so much! It always gives me a good laugh. ;-) And using a sandwich to fight with! Pure genius. X-D

You can't believe how excited I was to come back and see chapter nine! I had to reread the whole thing just to properly enjoy it. And it was just as wonderful the nth time.

I love the concept - sibling rivalry - I love the characterization of all involved - canon and original characters - and I love your execution. Truly one of my favorites. Thanks for this fic!

i really like that this is a light hearted piece. so glad that you wrote this!

Nice stuff!

You managed to make Bellan individual and credible, and I like how Obi-Wan could hold his own there in the beginning with the verbal sparring. This was an engaging read and each character had a distinct and accurate voice. Very good development, too. Well-crafted. Thanks for sharing.