sensitively written

Very tender. Nice.

Wow, I'd lie if I said this story was less than...WONDERFUL!

Thanks for sharing,

xx

You have real talent.

The only problem was also and asset I suppose; it was really short. (I don't mean it was crap so I was glad it was short, just that leaving the reader wanting more was a good writing tool but it would've still been good if you kept going.)

There is my pointless commentary. Keep writing.