You should really consider updating this, it's so unique and really intriguing, I love it!

Congratulations, this story is the most out of character piece of drivel I've ever read. The dialogue is horrendous. You basically just throw around shocking and crude dialogue for shits and giggles. If you're actually planning on, god forbid, getting published, don't try. Please, stick with your day job instead.

...this is the most fabulous fic ever! Please update, if you have the time :) I'd love to see what happens after this! I love AU Craig and Ellie.

Hmm I don't like how you made Ellie a whore, I don't think she'd ever do that without more explanation. I just think the story is so out of character for both of them.

Otherwise you write very well, I just wasn't too hot on the plot.

Ok so I've read all of it and it's effed up but very intriguing.

Ok, I'm only on the first chapter, but I love it! They're soo effed up together, it's likeable. It's the only time I can truly say I love Crellie as a couple. )

I really didn't get that...I go the idea that u made Ellie a slut and i don't like that at all

they r sick and twisted together - i absolutely love it. hoping for more sometime soon

i liked this! this was realy good!

YAY! I'm so happy that you updated! this story is really good.

This was the first het I've read in a ver, very long time. And it was lovely. Everyone was so perfectly on the money.

Craig is bound to fall Ellie has no sense of self worth, Spinner is a total fool, and Ashley will always believe she's the best. Even little things like Joey being worried about Craig breaking Angie are so right. And that girl! The girl who went home with Craig, I swear I know her in real life.

This was wonderful and very nearly restored my faith in het. Thank you.

Ouch. Poor Craig... Especially after his thoughts towards the end. What's Ellie's problem?...

This storyhot. Keep writing?

I really love this story and I really love this chapter...the end was sad though...I'm hoping that really SOON you can have them get back together...i love them together and I was looking forward to them helping each other get their lives on track. I kno that it cant be all happily ever after after only like 4 chapters, but they have had a rough 4 chapters so it would be nice for them to start and get things back on track. I really think they are Awesome together...PLease update SOON!

Please update this story...i really was enjoying it and i luv craig and ellie together...it was just getting more exciting! update please

PLease write more! I love this story...keep Ellie and Craig together! They are so awesome! I love Crellie