Please, oh PLEASE continue this story! I remember reading the first chapter when it originally was posted on here, and then today, I decided to see if there were any stories about Marai Gohan on here (because there aren't any good ones really...) and found your story again so I decided to add it to my favorites list and was shocked to find out that you had posted a second chapter!

I'm overjoyed that one of the best stories that I've ever seen has been updated and I hope that you continue to post stories...I'll be waiting anxiously for your next update!

hm ay chance you'll continue this?

though personally i think gohan should have been stronger than Goku...cos well trunks was the soem levle but had onyl been trained for a few years and gohan trained for 13ish more and does have a hell of a lot of natural strength

but anyway if you feel inspired do post some more chapters id love to see how you twist circumstances to be different than when trunks lived

i do hope he remains cold though i hate stories where gohan lives and goes back in time and suddenly starts acting like a needy little kid again

Please keep on writing. I really like the twist you put in the story. I've never read one like this before.

Thanks.

one thing to consider when writing... show and not tell. i am trying to find a good example. i will think of one. i am not the best writer. another major point is the tone. try not to change the tone too quickly.

good i hope to see an how this well change things

Again, a good story. Though once again, I was surprised, as I was expecting someone else. Well, keep up the good work, and hope you get back to writing these again.

bloody awesome keep it going

Well done, my friend, well done. Keep 'em coming.

Holy shit. This is an incredible story and you're an incredible author. I hope you update frequently. I love it. Made my favs.