Um, Wow?

oh, my poor Tristan. love's a wound indeed, if what you wrote in your summary is true, anyway.

dude, i love tristan in this. the kind of person you want on your side, ya know? worth knowing, though few bother to truly try. i don't mind either pairing, but i kinda wish you would have stuck to just one for this story.

finally! i was furious at the beginning that they would give up on Lancelot like that, honestly.

AIE. You *must* continue writing this. You *must*. I am totally in love with both of the pairings you've written here (more so TristanxLancelot than ArthurxLancelot, but it's all good) and I honestly can't wait to read more. T_T

An excellent story, I'm sure you know this by the amount of reviews you recieved. Many more than I ever have for any of my little tales. I think your writing is superb with only one or two little discrepencies, such as your continual reference to the analogy of a dying man clinging to something. You over use it.

Other than that, I'd say you have the makings of a great writer. Shame you ended this chapter so abruptly, it was finally getting to the good stuff. I'm glad that Lancelot has left Tristan, I didn't like the match.

From watching the film it was quite clear that Arthur and Lancelot loved each other very much, I don't really see Tristan getting a look in there. He's more of an asexual sort of guy.

Keep writing.

I love it oh so much, why have you not updated? Please do!

Aww, sad but good!

Whoa, great start and great writing!

This is really good so far!

Please update soon!

Dark Kaiser

Even tho it seems this will never be updated, i must say that it is a great story, BUT WHY DID LANCELOT HAVE TO GET WITH ARTHUR?

Tristan is the man! The beautiful wild man who saved Lancelots arse, the beautiful wild man who saved Lancelots arse, and who needs Lancelot more than Arthur. I mean come on! it was like the first (and now last) time he loved, and he gets rejected? not cool. Not cool at all.

But this story was worth reading for those moments of Tristan goodness and i do so hope that it gets updated.

ARE YOU ENDING IT THERE?

ARE YOU BEING DELIBERATELY MEAN?

HONESTLY.

Achingly beautiful. Thank you.

Yeah! update! I can't wait for more and though I'm happy to hear that there's only two chapters left because it means resolution I'm also a little sad because it mean the end of such a good story. Actually I decided to re-read the entire thing since it's been awhile and I still love it a pick out another favourite part each time, but I must say the whole scene with young Lancelot being told he will sit at Arthur's right at dinner is still my favourite. I really think there should be more stories about how the knights and Arthur first me. Oh and Yeah! Lancelot and Arthur are finally together though I still feel sorry for Tristan. Anyway, keep up the good work, although I have the worrisome thought that Tristan's pact with the gods is something very bad. Oh Tristan! He's not going to die is he? I guess I'll just have to find out.

The last time I updated this fic it was the TWENTY FIFTH OF SEPTEMBER! Which means that it is now 3 months and 6 days since you have updated, and the chapter's so bloody short!

Please update soon, and LONGER!

Only two more chapters to go... I can't wait!

Although, I seem to have forgotten a hellova lot of this story (for which I put the blame on you and your lack of updating) because I can't remember how Lancelot's chest became so battered. Please explain.

AND UPDATE SOON!