This is excellent. You certainly described Light wonderfully. :)

Very complex. Well, yes, RaitoxRyuuku is a bit scary, but the shinigami is a very interesting character, and fascinating to write about.

Very lovely It's so rare to find anything even vaguely Raito/Ryuuk

I think you characterized Ryuuku believably. He really isn't given much in the way of a personality. None of the Death Gods are. They just kind of...listen and obey, like when Raito was passing the Death Note between himself, Ryuuku, and Rem and they were obeying him. It's almost weird to think about, Death Gods listening to you.

They were indeed missing out. _ Liked it!

I LOVE IT. Definity going to my faves. I especially like the sentence "You have skeletons in your closet and gods of death in your bed." So true, so true... Ryuuku's my fave DN character and you did him great. Maybe you can do a follow-up of what Raito thinks of Ryuuku?

I just wanted to say that I quite enjoyed this piece, I loved the characterisation of Ryuuku, it made for fascinating reading. D

i really like this, very nice! Good exploration into ryukkus character. *fave*

this is cool. i luv it. XD

when i first saw this fic i was obsessed with it...then i lost it...but now that ive found it again i love it even more!

*Blinks* Whoa, that was excellent. RyuukiRaito somehow disturbs me too, but he's a lovable character somehow. Making snide remarks and eatting apples? Lol, that's some of the triats I like about him.

Actually, Raito/Ryuuki or Ryuuki/Raito is a pairing which really sets my interest. I mean there's Ryuuki as you basically said - just watching him day after day after day eating apples. _ I wanted to explore that pairing myself but I bet more than anything it'd be onesided - most probably Ryuuki from watching Raito all the time. I really like this fanfic! Good job!

O.o Ha, this fic is kool. I really liked how you described everything in Ryuuku's point of view. And the Ryuuku/Raito ness... Odd, but heh. This is really good and I hope you write more soon!

Oh cool! A fic describing the relationship between a boy and his Shinigami! lol It's great! I find Ryuuku to be very interesting. Without Ryuuku, the manga would be TOO serious. He's a great guy. lol Raito is very in character in this fic. Good job! I love to read about how he switches from normal to killer on a day to day basis.

You're such a good writer! _ I'm so happy to read some Death note fiction...mm yes, Ryuuku/Raito is a pretty scary thought, but this was kind of cute and interesting.