I love this. :3 Scott is one of favorite characters, and something like this reminds me of just why I love him - and the Evo 'verse, too.

I hope there's more, some day?

Your portrayal of Scott's post-show character is wonderfully accurate as are the other characters he encounters. If you did add additional chapters to this I would definitely read them. ) Great job.

Amazing fic!

Great job on putting some soul into both Logan and Scott, too many times I find Logan written as a one dimensional character that just growls and breaks stuff. Scott's thoughts on Rogue really brought out the humanity in this character that is often over-looked. I liked this fic, but please, take "Kangs" advice on the paragraphs. Great job and keep going.

I finally got the chance to read this story and am glad that I did. I loved it. You told the kind of story about Scott in one chapter that I have been beating my head against the wall for 16 chapters trying to tell about Captain America. I give this story the highest praise that I can and hope that you write more like it.

good work! I'm kinda fluffy too, and you did a good job with a character most people make into a jerk. thanks!

Hey~ Thanks for reviewing my story, though I've got to say the exact same thing about yours. _ this was a really interesting twist on X-men Evolution, and you did a great job with all the characters. I love the soft side you gave to Logan _ The whole fic was so touching _

I think it's sweet. And very reflective. Aw...poor Scott.

Wonderful, one of the most deligtful fics I have read in a long time. I would be estatic if you would add more chappies on.

i luv Scott fluffiness..but yea, i agree with Azabeth Kang, the dialouge was a bit hard to read. good job, tho. u should continue!

Thank you so much for this piece. I love reading about Scott, I think he is one of the strongest characters of the X-Men 'verse. You captured him well, thanks for doing justice to my favorite X-Man.

Ria

Nice little fic ya got here! I love the insight of Scott's character and I think you pulled it off really well. Please write more and I thank you for sharing this piece with everybody!

Not bad for a first story - cool idea. Some good background material on how Scott thinks of the others.

Not bad. You might want to disable the thing where only logged in users can review. You'll get more of them that way.

Oh. 'Fraid I got a bit lost here, since I've only seen X-Men 1.

Since I can't pass judgement on being in canon etc., I'm going to annoy you by pointing out your typos. Don't get me wrong, compared to plenty you're great, but I'm obsessive-compulsive and therefore get really annoyed by typos. It's a curse. Sorry.

Anyway, it's Rogue. Not Rouge. Rouge is pronounced Rooge (soft g) and is the French for 'red', or another name for blusher.

And a grammar point that also makes stuff easier on the eye and easier to figure out who's saying what:

New line for every new quote. Like so:

"Hello."

"How are ya?"

"Fine, thanks," he said. Although he wasn't quite sure of this, he didn't want to worry her. "I'm doing OK."

"You're lying. Something's wrong." she said brusquely.

Not like so:

"Hello." "How are ya?" "Fine, thanks," he said. Although he wasn't quite sure of this, he didn't want to worry her. "I'm doing OK." "You're lying. Something's wrong." she said brusquely.

The former is a lot easier to read than the latter, and you're less likely to wonder who's saying what.

Oh, and shouldn't telepathic speech have quote marks? I know people could argue both ways, but Cyclops and Professor X. are talking, in a manner of speaking. It's more talking than normal prose, anyway.

Don't take these in a negative way. Please. I liked the last paragraph. The simple, short dialogue and the empty-feeling the ending gave me...I liked that too. Keep writing.