Naruto is so weak

Dude way to leave it hanging natuten os my favorite pairing and it was getting good please if you have any idea about what thending may be please feel free to share with the rest of us

Wow... This was just amazing and it ended on such a cliffhanger so much could have happened but didint a shame this will never continue I see such promise in the ending it can have him show his training or it can be a timeskip someone needs to adopt it.

OMG YOU SHOULD WATCH NARUTO SHIPUden BEFORE YOU WROTE THIS YOU CHANGEND TO MUCH OF IT

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interesting but you don't need the
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crap my review was deleted well most of it sos about that I just realized it when I clicked the review button what I was saying was I really like your story its really interesting especially with the unconscious rivalry between sakura and hinata lol

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I began to read this story because it was Naruto/Hinata, but as the story progressed, I found that I didn't necessarily mind him with any of the characters. (Sakura was the one I least liked, but you made her character more bearable than most). When I realized it was going to be TenTen/Naruto (You hint at it a few times) I found that I still wanted to know the story, and i liked the reasonings very much. All in All I really like this story, and while I assume that it is abandoned, I thank you for the 24 chapters, they've made my week.

Check out some of my short Naruto Fics! Chance.

that was awsome...when's the next chapter coming out? i'm dying to see it!

This is quite and interesting plot. There is a lot of romance going on as well. I encourage you to keep up with your updates.

Loved it

this has been a good story i hope it becomea naruto/tenten/sakura/hinata fic because choosing one isn't fair he should chose them all.

awesome fanfic!but are you going to finish it?i realy hope so...

cool