I think I've read a story that goes with the same plot, but I really really want you to continue with this story... It has the mystery and depth that many stories have lost... it is rare to see stories that touches the darker side of one's past... it make things feel more real so please continue

Ah too short. Please update soon. I would love to see Kurama and Botan interact some more... I didn't know kurama was jealous of Yusuke even though their just friends...

this chapter feels as if its just the tip of the iceberg... i really do feel how you are laying the groundwork for the main events that will later take place in this fic. i have to commend you on a job well done so far; this angsty piece is really alluring and keeps the reader's attention with every word. i really can't wait til i get to read the next chapter!

Oh. My. God. An update! Seriously, my eyes literally bugged out of its sockets when i saw that you've updated! I'm so happy! I've been waiting for this for a very lonng time.. but, i really, patience sure does pay-off! I can't wait for the next chapters, i would really like to know about kurama and botan's past.. the earlier chapters of your story is shrouded with mystery and it really has me wanting and craving for more! Please do grant my wish and write more! thank you so much for this! you really made my day!

Hello. Great chapter, a little short but good and I don't see any mistakes. So keep going.

Seems like a couple of old fan fics are being updated now. I'm glad. :)

I wonder about Yusuke's almost smile after *sensually* assisting Botan. Was it because he was right in thinking that she was going to drink herself to death, or was he being his normal lecherous self? Most probably both. _

Oh, yeah, I thought Yukina knocked? "A knock on the door sent a painful shot in her head."

English not your first language? I couldn't tell at all! This is very well done! I'm eager to read more. Will be interesting to know what kind of past Kurama and Botan shared, what led to their situation then. Hoo, boy.

Hello. It's a great story, I love it so please update soon because I want to know how it will end.

This is really good plz update soon i want to read more about wat going on

Cld u please update faster? Great start, i think this will be a really good fic!

i really like this fic! its so different from the conventional kb stories out there. and the added angsty drama atmosphere only makes me want to read this story even more. i can't wait to read your rewrites as well as the next installment to your story!

Hello! I'm afaid I have not checked my e-mails in the longest time, so I missed chapter four. I hope to read the re-write soon. I aslso forget how I enjoy your writing style. Very simple and clean cut, though you may want to try dabbling with a thesaurus. Vocabulary can make a world of diference, as I have learned.

Angel

Well, you said that youll going to rewrite the prologue and the 1st charpter, but I really think that isnt necessary. Its beautiful. You knew how to describe the scenes, the emotions of the characters and the reader ends up feeling it too.

The last chapter was the best! It was long, with so much events... I cried on it ahauhaha.

I liked that Botan you create, she became ethereal, adult, misteryous... It matches with her "grown up-self"!

Dont take too long to update, ok girl?

Ah! Amazing title, by the way ;)

oh my, this fic is interesting,

though it's such a heartbreaker...

what happened to them? how about their child?

and then she's getting a divorce? (wrong move, botan! tsktsk..)

my heart aches for both of them...i mean, its quite obvious that they still have feelings for each other...(or am i just assuming things?...)

anyway, nice story!

can't wait for the update!:D

ps

i do hope things get better for them...

they're one of my fave couples...

they're like so meant to be together...

I just need to know why she left? Doing something like that to poor Kurama! I love Botan, but right now in this fic...she's not one of my favorite people in the world...I can't wait until a update...

Two years? TWO YEARS? That's . . . (pulls out calculator) . . .730 days!

Well, it was worth the wait. Truth be told, I plum gave up on this story after one year, so I'm very glad to see it alive again. I was a little confused at parts, but, all in all, I'm see lots of potential romantic angsting! YAY!

Also, when I read this: "Wonder Woman, that old hag."

My immediate mental image was of a ninety-year-old woman in leotard. Ew.

Anywho, keep up the good work, my dear!

Much love, Frith